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LOCAA 8 - Agent17

Jul 19th, 2016
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  1. LOCAA 8 Judgment - Agent76...er, 17.
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  3. All judgments by me will follow the following rubric:
  4. Danmaku Quality*: 14/20
  5. Character Relevance & Creativity: 3/20
  6. Aesthetics: 3/20
  7. This is a change since last time - danmaku matters more. Because in my opinion it should.
  8. *All patterns are given a score out of 10. Then the average of that is multiplied by 1.4 to get the score out of 14.
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  10. Nonspell 1: Not bad. Maybe a tad long of a lifebar but I enjoyed it. 7/10.
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  12. Spell 1: Also not bad. Can feel a bit overwhelming at times but I captured it all the same. Feels rather hard compared to the rest of the attacks. 6.5/10.
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  14. Nonspell 2: Also enjoyable. Very small spaces, but very slow. Good deisgn. 7/10.
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  16. Spell 2: Neat idea. Follow her or die horribly. Fun, fair, etc. 7.5/10.
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  18. Spell 3: Actually pretty boring. The lasers simply aren't threatening enough, and by the time they ARE a threat the pattern is basically over. The pattern itself is also a pretty boring spiral in my opinion. Not all that fun. 5/10.
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  20. Danmaku Quality: (7 + 6.5 + 7 + 7.5 + 5)/ 5 = 6.6*1.4 = 9.24
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  22. The patterns feel Sanae appropriate and are fairly creative. Good job. 3/3.
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  24. Aesthetics: Pretty good aesthetically. Quite pretty, and the nametag at the opening is a great touch. 2.5/3.
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  26. Final Score: 9.24 + 3 + 2.5 = 14.74/20
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