General mods:
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add "kudosu" to tags since soop namechanged between now and then lol

if you can fit it, add "rock japanese jp" to tags too

storyboard credits should probably change from "Ryuusei Aika" to "Stack" if Stack is the other bn now

"Timeline" mods:
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osu://edit/00:12:725 - hs volume here could be increased by 10-20%, it's hard to distinguish hitsounds in some parts from the song since 40% is really kinda quiet for this overall song intensity

osu://edit/01:52:436 (1,2,3) - kinda ugly flow into the slider since it curves up and away from the "centre" of the preceding jump, if you want you could just move it up in some way

osu://edit/02:32:812 - for this entire section would appreciate hitsounding whistles on vocals (since that's what the mapping focuses on mainly and the hitsounded drums are a little out of touch with the mapping)

the following parts/song also need more whistles to follow vocals/guitar/whatever it is the map's mapping to:
	ONE'S AGAIN
	BLACK MEMORY
	26:23:659 - in Kishikaisei STORY
	Mr. Phantom
	mist...
	Kijou no Kuuron ni Imi o Nasu



osu://edit/02:42:990 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - sounds a bit like sampleset broke here, I think it's supposed to be S:C69 instead of 55 for everything here, to fit with the rest of Ataraxia's hsing

osu://edit/04:21:699 - dropping down to 60% volume here is a bit meh, would prefer more like 70 or 75% since the song doesn't get *that* much quieter

osu://edit/04:42:972 - TOC calls you a boomer here

osu://edit/05:18:826 (7) - this repeat is missing hitsounds, looks like you meant to put snares on it but you applied it to the entire slider which for some reason broke it (just add hs per-note)

osu://edit/05:28:480 (6) - this could rly just have a drum hitnormal

osu://edit/05:28:628 - to 05:37:836 - dropping down to 40% volume kinda meh, would think 60% is more appropriate

osu://edit/05:46:450 (1,2,3,4) - would be cute if these all had whistles :3c

osu://edit/06:42:422 (1) - rhythm would perhaps be more pog by making each slider node clickable, like this: https://imgur.com/a/ps4kAPl

osu://edit/09:41:773 (1,2,3) - decrease spacing of these a little since I think they detract from the intensity of 09:42:223 (1,2,3) - which are on much stronger sounds

osu://edit/09:50:023 - silence spinner or do gradual decrease in hs volume D:

osu://edit/11:08:096 (2) - head missing snare 11:48:522 (1) - tail missing snar

osu://edit/12:06:220 (1) - this is 1/6

osu://edit/12:18:090 - silence spinner or do gradual decrease in hs vol

osu://edit/14:57:556 (3,2) - fix stack or I'll cry

osu://edit/15:27:758 - section is missing many snares: 15:28:180 (1) - 15:29:871 (3) - 15:30:716 (7) - 15:32:406 (3) - 15:38:321 (2) - 15:41:702 (1) - 15:43:392 (3) - 15:45:082 (1) - 16:07:054 (3) - 16:07:899 (2) -

osu://edit/16:22:961 - hs volume for all parts of this song could be raised like 10-15%

osu://edit/17:02:492 (4) - flow going into the stream at 17:02:648 (5,6,7,8) - is a bit meh, perhaps just move 17:02:492 (4) - up a bit

osu://edit/17:55:770 (1) - finish addition here would be nice to accompany the song

osu://edit/18:39:292 (6,7,8,9) - these could all have snares really :D

osu://edit/19:53:166 - OW WHY IS IT SUDDENLY 100% VOL HERE CAN IT REMAIN AT 70% PLS THANKS

osu://edit/20:30:892 (2) - think this would player cuter here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14662651/2841 since it captures the 1/1 rhythm a bit better and also a cute blanket with the other slider

osu://edit/22:23:560 (7) - could NC this here since the pattern here is functionally separated from the rest of the combo

osu://edit/23:25:363 - 23:25:847 - can you not ignore the 1/4 here, it's really obvious and you can't even say that you preferred to map a slider over it or anything :C

osu://edit/24:07:621 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - SAME AAA THIS IS PAINFUL

osu://edit/23:29:395 (2) - each slider node needs a snare aaa

osu://edit/23:44:556 (2) - missing snare

osu://edit/24:42:485 (1) - might as well hitsound a kick on the slider head since it fits better with both song and map

osu://edit/24:48:901 (4,5) - 24:51:165 (4,5) - all doubles lik these that don't both have kicks already should have whistles

osu://edit/25:34:561 - silence spinner end or gradual decrease yada yada

osu://edit/26:02:533 (3,4,5) - would recommend over-hsing kicks and whistles here to mask the slightly off timing

osu://edit/26:22:286 (4) - this guy should be a kick

osu://edit/27:12:309 (13) - missing snares on repeats

osu://edit/27:31:418 (1) - NC looks like it belongs 27:31:775 (2) - here to match up with 27:26:953 (1,2) -

osu://edit/27:59:664 (1) - sounds like this should be auto addition not Normal

osu://edit/29:10:943 - many hsing issues here
	- why is there such a clicky hitnormal in some parts? it doesn't really fit with the song at all nor the rest of the map, could just use default soft-hitnormal (it fits 31:13:749 - here but nowhere else in the map)
	- the kicks in the beginning like 29:10:943 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - and 29:17:193 (1,2,3,4) - should not be hsed using soft-hitwhistles, since it's a completely different sound that doesn't fit, just use a kick sample or drum-hitnormal or something
	- finish spam 29:25:943 - here overdone and it drowns out the other hs + the song itself, please reduce

osu://edit/30:40:646 - please don't replace hitwhistle with this ride/open hihat sample, it's not really fitting at all and doesn't really "highlight" any sounds since you're using it so often it just creates a lot of white noise and blends in

osu://edit/32:17:382 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - kinda sad you didn't follow the 3/4 vocals here :C please consider doin a different rhythm to account for them

osu://edit/32:30:099 (5) - slider head missing snare

osu://edit/33:00:397 - why is this all 40% volume aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa make it louder like 60% 33:43:803 - same same same

osu://edit/35:03:825 (2) - missing drum hitclaps

osu://edit/36:39:413 - fade dis slider out with hs volumeeee

osu://edit/38:08:805 - ^

osu://edit/39:38:075 - can there be like a different sample for the soft-hitwhistle because there's like none used and the one that is used isn't really fit to be used like a normal soft-hitwhistle

osu://edit/40:41:575 (1) - slider head missing snare

osu://edit/41:23:403 (1) - kinda sounds like this should be on the 1/6 tick at 41:23:376 -

osu://edit/44:15:354 (4) - missing kick

osu://edit/46:22:761 (2,3,4) - Could use drum-hitfinish / drum-hitclap here to accentuate the toms in the song :3c

osu://edit/49:08:189 (3) - osu://edit/49:08:559 (1) - osu://edit/49:11:152 (3) - osu://edit/49:11:522 (1) - osu://edit/49:11:892 (3) - missing kick

osu://edit/50:59:297 (7) - sounds like this is missing clap of some sort, either snare or the drum-hitclaps

osu://edit/51:21:988 (1) - there's a default clap here, sounds like a missing sample since there should be a snare hitsound

osu://edit/52:33:753 - until 52:37:870 - is unhitsounded, pls add appropriate hitsoundsssss