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- Hey there! :3
- Firstly, your terrain. I like it a lot. You have good variation, and a nice amount of layers.I also like the palette - you've kept a good amount of grass in there. That means you can 'decorate' the land now, with the use of growing grass/tall grass, flowers, wheat, reeds etc.
- Secondly, organics. I never recommend trees to be made from all clay, unless it's a large tree/fantasy themed. It makes the tree look likes it made from Plasticine and looks really cartoonish, which isn't a good look. I highly recommend making your tree from logs and leaves - you can mix some other blocks in, but make the majority out of the original blocks.
- Take a look at Plutouthere on YouTube and watch some of his tree tutorials.
- Lastly structure. The little campfire area is really cute. I like it, it fits with the style really nicely! I also like the small house with the hay bales, but I'm not too sure why you've encased it in the cobble stone walls! I don't think it really works on the plot. It just looks a little out of the style.
- You def need a lot more structure on your plot; towers could be nice. You also need to incorporate some atmosphere into the build. You could do this through the use of the decoration I mentioned in the terrain section, and you could also add pathways, more structures, more trees etc.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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