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wertpoi's Novice Review

Jul 5th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. I like your terrain a lot. You have a good shape to it and a really nice palette for the stone and the grass. There is one area of the terrain which looks a bit strange, and that's the area at the back - it looks like it's hanging by a thread, and doesn't look too realistic. I would either take that part out, or just make it solid without the underneath.
  4. I would also recommend covering a few more areas with your grass palette.
  5. Decoration is also appreciated on the grass! This can be grass, flowers, ferns, melons, wheat etc. This adds to the atmosphere, like water/ponds and pathways also.
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  7. Secondly, organics. Your tree has a really nice shape to it! However, the leaves need work. Remember you have //brush now, so you can use that to make your leaves! Just make sure you have a high percentage of air in it.
  8. E.g.
  9. //br sphere 90%air,10%leaves 5
  10. //mask air
  11. It helps to add some smaller and thinner branches too, which you can follow with your brush to add the leaves, then 'fill in the gaps'.
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  13. Lastly, structure. You don't have any! Structure is needed to pass at this level. Just make sure you include a nice amount of depth and detail!
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  15. Good luck!
  16. - Dutty :3
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