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- Hey there! :3
- Firstly, terrain. I like your terrain a lot. You have a good shape to it and a really nice palette for the stone and the grass. There is one area of the terrain which looks a bit strange, and that's the area at the back - it looks like it's hanging by a thread, and doesn't look too realistic. I would either take that part out, or just make it solid without the underneath.
- I would also recommend covering a few more areas with your grass palette.
- Decoration is also appreciated on the grass! This can be grass, flowers, ferns, melons, wheat etc. This adds to the atmosphere, like water/ponds and pathways also.
- Secondly, organics. Your tree has a really nice shape to it! However, the leaves need work. Remember you have //brush now, so you can use that to make your leaves! Just make sure you have a high percentage of air in it.
- E.g.
- //br sphere 90%air,10%leaves 5
- //mask air
- It helps to add some smaller and thinner branches too, which you can follow with your brush to add the leaves, then 'fill in the gaps'.
- Lastly, structure. You don't have any! Structure is needed to pass at this level. Just make sure you include a nice amount of depth and detail!
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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