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- Hello _Astrid_!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure!
- Your structure has some nice detailing going on but it lacks depth. ./warp depthtutorial for extra reference.
- Your trees are really nice especially since they're custom made. :D the fences are a nice touch as well.
- As of now, your terrain is a little plain and flat. Try adding other blocks for variation such as green clay, green wool, cobblestone, gravel, etc. Make the bottom of your pond sand/sandstone. You could also add flowers to your plot for color.
- Keeps these suggestions in mind and you'll rank up in no time. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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