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- Hello ariesrae123!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
- Your house has some really average detail but the depth isn't as great. Try to add some extra detailing to the supports (wood logs) on the sides so the walls doesn't look so flat even wth the detailing. You could also work on the dock/boat especially when it's compared to your house. ./warp depthtutorial for extra reference
- Your tree could use some work. I like how you used wood blocks instead of logs. It's a little weird how when the trunk gets to the branches, it becomes really skinny. Also, add some roots to your tree make them long. Your tree does take up space effectively thou. You might wanna add a lot more leaves as well.
- You terrain is nice and smooth and i like how you added other blocks for variation. You should make the bottom of the pond sandstone/birch wood so it looks more realistic. Adding sugar canes/lilypads to the sides also gives more detail and realism.
- I think you may need to work on your plot a little more before I could rank you to novice. Listen to my suggestions and You'll be a novice in no time. Good Luck and I hope you have better chances with your next submission! :D
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