Tayter_Kat

Maleaka

Jul 20th, 2015
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  1. Hello Maleaka, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your Novice Plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. Your house is good, but it is lacking some depth. Depth is the layers within a building/structure. You can add depth by incorporating slabs, fences, buttons. trap doors, and stairs. If you need a visual example, visit /warp depthtutorial. This shows you both good and bad examples of depth.
  5. Terrain:
  6. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. I see you have hills, but the rest of your plot is lacking. Try adding more interesting terrain to your plot to make it less flat. You have World Edit, get creative. Just make sure the plot doesn't have a lot of flat areas.
  7. Organics:
  8. This is anything living, like animals and trees. Your tree is good, but try adding more around the plot. This will make your plot have a better atmosphere. Atmosphere, in this case, is the feeling you get from looking at your plot, like happy or eerie. You plot seems happy, but if you add more trees, this will add to the feeling.
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  10. Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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