Bazaar Cleanup & Overhaul

BAZAAR FIXES, CHANGES, AND ADDITIONS

Main Menu
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║   Shops    │    Tent    │            │            │            ║
╟────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────╢
║            │            │            │            │            ║
╟────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────╢
║            │            │            │            │   Leave    ║
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Shops
Tent
Back Alley

Rat/Cinnabar
Demon/Lilium
Lizans/Roxanne
GripingDemons

The shop descriptions shouldn't display on the bazaar main menu. This was carried over from vanilla when (surprise surprise) Revamp moved the shops to their own menu but not the shop descriptions. A short paragraph that describes the shops with a couple of words to take up the space here would be fitting.

Look into the viability of Gats' whorehouse to see if it's any good.

The tiger/back alley encounter can trigger the moment you enter the bazaar. Is this a problem? It's a one time encounter, and if your lust isn't high enough you can't molest him. The lust check could be axed to remedy this, or simply not have it be able to trigger the second you enter the bazaar.

If you've seen the first warning for the Fap Arena, it doesn't have a second one if you click on it again and have no option to chose not to participate unlike the first time.

Does the Back Alley have any use at all after the prison stuff was disabled? From what I remember it was only there as an alternative to discover it. If it was only prison related, remove/disable it.

If you speak to Roxanne (and probably any other interaction that presents a sprite), back out, and get ASSaulted, the sprite will remain through the scenes until you get back to the bazaar.


═══════════════╡SHOPS╞═══════════════

All of the shop names still use shorthand names in the tooltips instead of their full names.

>One of the wagons proudly proclaims itself to be “Greta’s Garments,”
Shouldn't this coma be outside of the quotation, since it's not a character represented on the sign?

>though both 'G’s are emphasized
The parser is back at it again. The second single quote is fancy.

>All it has on it is a sign that reads “Chilly Smith”.
"Chilly Smith" should not be italicized.

Telly's shop button disappears when she isn't open instead of being grayed out. This could use a tooltip that either says here wagon isn't here or is closed, depending on which it is.


┌──────┐
│BENOIT│
└──────┘
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║    Buy     │    Sell    │    Talk    │            │            ║
╟────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────╢
║  Feminize  │Basil. Womb │            │            │            ║
╟────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────╢
║            │            │            │            │   Leave    ║
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Second row should fill in in this order.

Benoit still doesn't have a tooltip in the Shop menu (he actually doesn't have ANY tooltips at all).

>This mechanical clock looks like it was originally constructed by the Goblins before the corruption spread throughout Mareth.
Uncapitalize "goblin".

>Check back every day; ze Spectacular Salvage Shop always 'as new zings to sell.”“Some may call zis junk,” says Benoit, indicating his latest wares. “Me... I call it garbage.”
Missing space. Also having that last sentence there just looks weird.

His second row of one-off items could do with filling out the first empty slot on that row when you buy one.

Benoit's affection doesn't increase past 5% every day with the Talk option, and they don't have the finality to them they'd have if they send you back to camp. If there are no issues with it, make his Talk option put you back into Benoit's main menu instead of sending you to your camp.

>You linger long enough to share breakfast with him, and then return to camp.The sky begins to grow brighter as the moon descends over distant mountains, casting a few last ominous shadows before they burn away in the light.
Mossing space.

The Suggest option doesn't seem to appear as it should when carrying unfertilized eggs from an ovi elixer/oviposition perk.

You get the Basilisk Womb and Oviposition perks in a completely different scene than where you drink the potion for it. Instead, you get it the next time you have sex with him. This should be looked at if it could be ammended.


┌────────────────┐
│GRETA'S GARMENTS│
└────────────────┘
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║ Low Stock  │            │            │            │            ║
╟────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────╢
║   Bikini   │Nun's Habit │            │            │            ║
╟────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────╢
║            │            │            │            │   Leave    ║
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>There doesn't seem to be anything aside from cock-socks here
This sentence is weird because there are obviously still things there, just not for sale.

>except maybe a super-skimpy chain bikini that’s chased with white and gold highlights.
Maybe? Are you unsure if you're seeing a super-skimpy chain bikini that's chased with white and gold highlights?

>There doesn’t seem to be anything for sale that you can see, except maybe a super-skimpy chain bikini that’s chased with white and gold highlights.
It says this when there is still no stock for cock socks, but it also displays the message for having the nun's habit for sale after it.


COCK SOCKS

After pressing Low Stock it puts you in a new menu with a Back in the bottom right. Rename it to "Next" and put it in slot 0.

After pressing Low Stock, gray the button out and add as the tooltip "Greta still hasn't caught up with her backlog of cock sock orders."

Low Stock in slot 0 should be replaced by Browse Socks when she starts selling them instead of being in slot 1 and having a blank slot 0.

If you don't have any dicks that can get a cock sock on them, gray the Browse Socks button out instead of removing it with a tooltip saying something like "You have no free cock that can have a sock."

The spellpower enhancing cock sock is not listed under Spell Mod in the stats menu. Make sure that the other cock socks also display in their respective menus.


NUN'S HABIT & BIKINI

Buying the Nun's Habit could do with displaying the stats on the item like the bikini does. Rename the Yes button to "Buy Habit" and the No button to "No Thanks" or whatever fits better. The No option also doesn't need a tooltip if it's just "Nah."

Rename the Back button on the Bikini option to "No Thanks" or whatever fits better and move it to slot 1.

Buying the Nun's Habit brings you back to camp instead of the shop menu, same with the lusty bikini thing.

The Nun's Habit option currently overrides the Remove Sock option. Blame Oca and move the Remove Sock option to slot 1.


┌────────────────┐
│SLIPPERY SQUEEZE│
└────────────────┘
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║Joey Massage│ Androgyny  │            │            │            ║
╟────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────╢
║Joey's Offer│            │            │            │            ║
╟────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────┼────────────╢
║            │            │            │            │   Leave    ║
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The options are could use tooltips. Some of them like Joey'sOffer are very vague.

Add a space to "JoeyMassage" and "Joey'sOffer"

Have pressing "No" on Joey'sOffer put you back into the main menu of the shop, not the Bazaar.

>Then again, if you made have him masturbate, it would probably stimulate his muscles to force all that fluid out.
"made have him"

Rename "MasturbateOut" to "Not Happening" or something along those lines to better reflect what the choice is for: not participating in this (possibly) gay shit.

After selecting MasturbateOut it immediately sends you back to camp. There is no transitional text which is really weird, so a short blurb of him going to the back room and you heading back to the bazaar would be for the best. This would obviously make the change of putting you in the bazaar's shop menu instead of your camp.

The "Androgyny" button is spelled wrongly as "Adrogyny".

>What do you think? Will you take the cock massager for 200 gems?
It was called a cock milker just a few sentences up.

When you buy the cock milker, it puts you back into his main menu without the Androgyny button being available until you leave and re-enter.


┌────────────┐
│CHILLY SMITH│
└────────────┘
The Talk option brings you back to camp instead of putting you back in the shop's main menu.

Using Back in either the Weapons or Armor menu doesn't clear the text from them.


┌─────────────────────┐
│TELLY'S TOYS & TREATS│
└─────────────────────┘
Telly should have the selected Talk topic grayed out. Except for Chat, for obvious reasons.

The No Thanks option after hugging Telly should put you in her shop menu again.

Telly's "Hours of operation:" tooltip note varies from Benoit's. These two should follow the same format for consistency.

Should her button order follow the standard format of button layouts where Appearance comes first?


═══════════════╡FOOD TENT╞═══════════════

The harpy under Staff should have the Nevermind button in the bottom right. Same for the rhino and satyr.

Pressing Nevermind in the rhino's menu.
>You tell Harry you just wanted to chat and he tells you he’ll be cooking while you talk. The conversation doesn’t cover anything terribly important. Harry makes a bunch of sex jokes about harpies, satyrs, centaurs and even you as he continues to cook. By the time you leave your sides are hurting from laughing so hard.
Forced personality on the player and just a bad scene.

>“... and I mean anything,”
Extra space.

This is as far as I'm willing to go.