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- Hey there! :3
- Firstly, terrain and structure look lovely! There's nothing I need to say about them at all, love the way they look! :3
- I would suggest, however, maybe a little pond area in the space you've left open? Could look cute!
- Your trees, however, need a little improvement. Your leaves are not proportional to your trunks. Either make the trunks a little skinnier, or make them taller and fluff out the leaves some more.
- I think overall, the leaves need changing anyway. They have too much of a 'pyramid' shape. Leaves should be fluffy and round in shape!
- Have a look at Plutouthere on YouTube, and check out his tree tutorials!
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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