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Huge_Pyro's Initiate Review

Jul 7th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain and structure look lovely! There's nothing I need to say about them at all, love the way they look! :3
  4. I would suggest, however, maybe a little pond area in the space you've left open? Could look cute!
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  6. Your trees, however, need a little improvement. Your leaves are not proportional to your trunks. Either make the trunks a little skinnier, or make them taller and fluff out the leaves some more.
  7. I think overall, the leaves need changing anyway. They have too much of a 'pyramid' shape. Leaves should be fluffy and round in shape!
  8. Have a look at Plutouthere on YouTube, and check out his tree tutorials!
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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