xDraghun

TCL135 Plot Review

Jul 18th, 2015
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  1. Hello TCL135!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Not much to say that it is exceeding expectations for initiate, but some flaws can be seen. Lets start off with your structures.
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  5. Your structures are pretty good and represent detail and depth decently. The blocks that are used compliment each other really well. You hot air ballon needs some more detailing thou. try using sandstone like you did with your buildings. Your gold bridge has a nice layout, but the block doesnt really go with the things around your plot.
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  7. Your custom trees are really nice and show lots of effort. Maybe your could try adding branches, roots, or air holes for a more realistic effect. Apples would also look really good on your trees. You have also provided a good amount of them based on your plot size.
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  9. Your terrain I really like. I love how its not just plain grass on the top and you've added clay for variation and color. The layering of different blocks underneath is really nice and the cyan clay/cobblestone/andesite really compliment the stone/terrain and how its being used. Your river flows really well with your plot, but next time try and add stuff into your pound like maybe stone spikes, lilypads, etc.
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  11. Overall, your plot is really nice and shows a lot of effort for me to promote you to novice. Good Luck and I hope you do well on your next plot. /warp novice and /plot auto :DDD
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