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- Hello siasssnbvb, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot.
- Honestly, ill keep it short and clean. You don't need to fix much since it Is a good plot. The only thing you need to work on is fixing the terrain. The ground looks to unrealistic. try making it more smoother and that will make it believable. If you want to add hills, go ahead, but it looks to blocky. trying to smooth it out like you did with the stone on the other side of the plot. Everything else looks great!
- Good Luck<3
- -Tayter_Kat
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