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- Hey there! :3
- I know you've received a lot of reviews from people, and they've all said probably multiple different things that were hard to keep on top of. I know that you've added and you've taken away basically everything that people have asked of you. And I really respect and appreciate that you've put in all the time that we've asked you to put in.
- It's a good plot, it really is. But it's not Apprentice worthy.
- A lot of it, because of the additions we've asked of you, just seem completely random now - for example the dinosaur, and some of the houses and organics. I think you chose too much of a difficult building surface when you made the terrain what it is, and in my opinion, I think it really might benefit you to restart.
- If I were you, I would build terrain that is a lot simpler in design than this. Make sure you do include multi layers of terrain, maybe a cliff, or maybe something similar to this, but not exactly. I think this type of terrain isn't usually made for building purposes and is instead made for organics and terrain detail.
- I really do think a fresh start would do you real good. There's too much on this plot now that makes no sense, and we're partly to blame, so I do apologise for that. However, I do wish you the best of luck with your new plot - just don't rush it. Take your time with it and really make it look amazing!
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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