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Tsubaki MSS Review

Mar 17th, 2021 (edited)
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  2. Tsubaki: It was thanks to her that I met you at that time,@and thought...
  3. --> After this line, you're missing another line from Tsubaki saying “守りたい”@って思えたんです. It made the rest of the json misaligned.
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  5. 340362-3
  6. (add line breaks after "yourself" and the 2nd "you")
  7. Ichika: "Hey you,@don't get full of yourself@just because you're a little bit strong!@I'm definitely gonna beat you@at the next district tournament!"
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  9. (add a line break after "someone")
  10. Ichika: "Guh...@Just how much do you have to mock someone@'til you're satisfied?!@I'm [textRed:Ichika Kasumi]!@We go to the SAME dojo!!"
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