<Rena> :D
<LukeRichards> are you using 'council' or are they actually called Counsil? if counsil, you said council once. if council, you said counsil twice.
<LukeRichards> you might want to check the first half of the first line of #39
<LukeRichards> 41: at the end, you said commited. I assume you typo'd committed*
<LukeRichards> #49, evilest. you *could* experiment here with more adjectives, just a personal opinion. (most evil, treacherous, etc)
<LukeRichards> #51: *brothers' *holds
<LukeRichards> Also on 51, it's rather long with several clauses, you *could* make it 2 sentences. another personal opinion :3