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  1. Hey there :3
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  3. First off, I'm going to talk about your terrain. I like it, it has good shape, and works with the plot. However, I think the cliffs could use some diversity. Try mixing some other blocks in with the stone so that you have a palette going with it, like you have with the coloured clay in the grass.
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  5. You have some nice organics, I like the flowers, however they are a little simple and all look the same. You could make some of the petals on some of the flowers have a little more shape, than a consistent 'circle' type pattern. Your trees are great as well, although maybe add leaves to the other one you have in the corner without leaves :p
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  7. Lastly, I think your structure is lovely. I think it's extremely creative and bizarre, and because of those features, it's lovely to look at because you don't see it everywhere!
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  9. Overall lovely :3 Just change a few little things I mentioned ^.^
  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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