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- Hello LPSsmash!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot. Lets start of with your structure.
- I suggest not making your structure a mushroom but still making it related to a mushroom theme. As is, it looks weird especially the under of your mushroom. Tbh its giving me more of a candy cane vibe, and your mushroom is round enough on the sides.
- Your smaller mushrooms are pretty much the equivalent of your bigger mushroom. So try to make them look more like mushrooms and less like candycanes.
- Your terrain is pretty nice and has some decent smoothing. Try to add another block to your terrain though for color and variation. It looks too purple rn and its overwhelming. Try to smooth the mounatins so it doesnt looke so squarish in the back.
- I think your plot needs some major adjustments before I can rank u. good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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