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- Hello FlandraGamer!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
- Your structure is a lacking depth and detail. Try to add some stairs/slabs for more detail cuz your walls look pretty flat as is. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial for extra help.
- Your trees need some more leaves and then smooth it after you add them. Add some roots to your trees too! I think you could add another tree on the top of your mountain.
- Your mountain looks pretty smooth but it's weird how your brick road just sinks down into the mountain. It doesn't look appealing. Your farmland doesnt look natural either. Try to smooth it down. Smooth the edges of your pond as well and add some flowers/ sugar cane around the pond for a more realistic effect.
- I think you could put more effort and detail onto your plot, which is why im denying your review. Keep my suggestions in mind and I hope you rank up soon. Good Luck andI hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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