MaxBurger "review/feedback"

honestly, just a few paragraphs in, this is already quite possibly my favorite fatfur story i've ever read? just.. all the explicit details about Mai and just.. how fat he is, how unable to do anything he is, how spoiled he is, just.. god. i love this already, and i'm already wishing i could be in Mai's spot, ahah...

fuck me, just the description of the MaxBurger, along with the pre-assumption that Mai's gonna be stuffing his face with those until he bursts, is riling me up more than the description of Mai.. hufff...

oh my god, 35 burgers a day.. 47.. 60.. A HUNDRED.. fucking, oh my god..

the first mention of him vomiting from eating too much is actually.. really hot, fuck.. i dont like vomiting stuff, it just grosses me out, but in this context.. FUCK

god.. i wish i could be Mai..

DAY ONE

if Mai's already feeling packed to the brim at 49 burgers.. how does he plan on eating 2x that many by the end of the week?? this.... this is going to get really good.....

70,000 fucking calories, good lord.. 5lbs in a day.. already wishing I could be in Mai's place.....

DAY TWO

i LOVE how upset and desperate for more Mai seems to get when Ban argues with him.. he's really determined to eat as much as he can, n' just, god, he's perfect <3

""Fine. Eat, you fucking pig. Eat until you explode. See if I care."" hhhHHHHhhHHhHHHh

i dont know if i'd rather BE Mai in this situation, or be forced to feed him.. (nah i know, i'd still rather be Mai <3)

DAY THREE

"Do I look like I give a shit about my stupid heart?" <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

i love Mai

all these descriptions of his thinning fur and growing stretchmarks are really fucking me up, god.....

who knew that he could even GET full? <3

ooooohhh... Ban sounds like he's starting to WANT to make Mai bigger... i know i would <3

every time you just.. mention how big Mai is, it just coMPLETELY FUCKS ME UP, like, oh my god.. could you imagine being that BIG?? that much of a hog, a glutton, a fatass, that you fucking fill up an entire couch????? FUCK, i wish that were me.....

DAY FOUR

AAAAAHH YES, BAN WANTS TO MAKE HIM BIGGER, YES YES YES

GOALS: BE SO FUCKING HUGE THEY NEED TO SMASH WALLS DOWN AND USE A CRANE TO GET YOU OUTSIDE, HUFFFFFFFF

his only purpose in life is to eat, and eat.. and eat....... and get bigger and fatter and just oh god. *swoooooon* <3

180,000 calories.. in a single day.. i dont even come close to eating that much in a month or two.. holy fuck.. still really fucking wish that all of this happening to Mai could happen to me....

sixty.. sixty five burgers already.......

all this talk about Mai getting close to ripping right apart and all is just... <3.. i love all the constant mentioning of how full he gets, and how fucking MASSIVE his stomach is, how thin his skin and fur are getting and how many new stretch marks are forming.. <3

100lbs of meat and cheese.. i want it.........

"it was clear that the hyena's body was barely holding together, and Mai wasn't listening to any of the warning signs." <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

"Nothing else in the world mattered: not education, not a job, not an independent life, not mobility, not even getting laid. It was ONLY food." is.. is it bad that i want to live like this irl, to a tee? only caring about food and how much of it im going to cram down my throat?? just.. i.. yeah............ >//////////<

..again..... not normally a fan of vomit in any way, shape, or form........ but you somehow make it appealing by also applying the connotation of "hey look at this fatass who LITERALLY ATE OVER A HUNDRED POUNDS OF FOOD IN A DAY", hahahaha............... fuck this is hot

DAY FIVE

ooooohh... something to stop him from throwing up.. along with all the super carbonated soda and energy drinks.. along with the hunger pills.. along with the complete desire to hit 100 before the week ends...... <3

aaahhh the tail remark is really cute <3

"His skin so dangerously thin that Ban could practically see his fat cells bloating out with lard underneath it. He looked ready to explode at any moment." HUFFFFFFFF <3 <3 <3

60.. 70.. 88......

OOOOOH the groan..... its about to get really good.. and really, REALLY close to bursting..... <3

god, his aspiration to just keep on going, even when he's literally just a few burgers away from bursting.. <3 <3 <3

i just love how Mai has.. literally nothing going for him in life except food....... it's.. kinda aspirations tbh........ <3

90 burgers.. good lord. <3

DAY SIX

im starting to actually feel myself physically shake and tense up a little bit just from thinking about being in Mai's situation, as well as thinking about his own impending doom...... <3

"You're the biggest, fattest, hungriest glutton on the planet. And there is nothing that will get between you and your food." HHHHHHHG GOALS

i love how Ban's mood towards Mai has completely changed from the beginning.. he used to not even want to do a damn thing for Mai, but he was forced into doing it.. now he's willingly force feeding Mai just to make him happy, and just.. gosh i LOVE it! <3

i also wish Ban would force feed me, huffff.....

"the hyena's belly seemed to already be right on the edge of giving in and exploding all over the place. One rough slap or misplaced claw could mean Mai's end. That's how precarious his situation was." AAAAAAAAAAA <33333 i LOVE this description of Mai.. so.. so delicate, but so FUCKING HUGE at the same time, its just perfect <3

burping but nothing coming out.... ooffff he's gotta be packed as full as he can getttt.. but of course he still eats more <3

DAY SEVEN

OOOOHH i know he's gonna burst, and i KNOW it's gonna be fucking amazing already.... <3

"it [Mai's belly] finally rested against the wooden floor" goals.. having a belly so monstrously huge it not only takes up an entire fucking couch, it also sags down to the floor and beyond.. hufffff <3

i want to give Mai belly rubs <3

aaahhhHHH he's so close!!!!! 95... come on Mai, we alllll know you can eat more~ <3

i love you Ban.. i love you for keeping this fucking feast going <3

"His lungs and heart were already pushed up into his throat, his liver and spleen compressed into nothing. There was only room for fat and food in Mai's body." HHHNGGGNGFFFF FUCK

98!!!  the complete breathlessness, the intense pressure.. the insane heartbeat.. and he still wants to eat more <33333

blood.. the first signs of him ripping right open <3

come on, 99!! ohhhff... just thinking of being as fucking full and packed and stuffed as Mai is, is just... dslkj hnsdfa;kjblfds;k

HHHHHHHH GOD, FORCING MORE FOOD INTO SOMEONE WHO LITERALLY CANT CONTAIN ANYMORE IS SO FUCKING HOT DFAHJLSAFDSJLBHKSDFAN

c'mon.. dont rip completely before 100~.. only a little bit~ <3

AAHH Mai wants the final burger, even though he knows it'll burst him to pieces <3

"Ban could still see half a burger in the back of his muzzle." this reminds me of a certain artist i know of who draws things similar to this.. people so FUCKING FULL that the food cant even be crammed down their throat anymore, and just.. FUCK that is SO HOT

*creeeeeak*.... *groooooooannn*... *riiiiip*.. *teaarrr*.. <33333333

"Even as enormous and grotesque and monstrous as his belly was, he wanted more food. He wanted every single one of those 180,000 calories and he didn't care what happened to his body." this is how i want to go out.. not from old age, not from natural causes.. but from eating so fucking much my body cant handle even a single crumb more <333

ENDING ONE (HAPPY)

ok being honest i just skipped right over this in my first time reading this

ok im going back after reading the bursting ending, being fully aware that this ending will personally not be as good to me simply because i love bursting stuff, its so fucking good but its underappreciated and underdone in art and stories and stuff.. im keeping in mind that most people DONT like bursting though, soooo.. yeah

the "im not going to eat again.." going straight to Mai demanding more food is just too cute <3

ENDING TWO (SPLODY)

THE ONE POKE ON HIS EXTREMELY DISTENDED AND TAUT AND OVERSTUFFED AND RIPPING BELLY IS ALL IT TOOK.. so sensitive and big, aaaa <3

<33333 the description of his skin and fur and fat exploding off of him first, GOD yes.. this is way too underlooked in bursting stuff <3

AND THE DESCRIPTION OF HIS STOMACH BLOWING UP AS WELL, AAAAHHH god, SO GOOD <333

"But Ban never forgot the smile on his brother's fat face just before he exploded." this is both adorable, cute, but also morbid and slightly horrifying if you think deep about it.. but GOD i just love that mental image.. realizing that you've finally fulfilled your BIGGEST dreams and aspirations in life (really, your ONLY dreams and aspirations..).. even if it did result in your death.. <3333333

and knowing that your brother was the one who helped you along the way, albeit reluctantly at first, but changing his mind in the long run and just going all in.. HUFFFFFF <3333333

god, i'm shivering just from thinking about if i was somehow in Mai's place.. i'd do fucking anything to be in his place, throughout the entire story, throughout his entire life leading up to this moment, and the final moments of his life.. god, if only this could all somehow happen IRL.. i'd give up everything to do this <3