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- Hello arabiandragon, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot...
- Buildings/structures:
- Well, first off, your barn is very creative, but it is lacking detail and depth. You can add more depth by adding trapdoors, buttons, slabs, stairs, fences, etc. If you add more depth, the build will look much better!
- Terrain/Organics:
- Your tree is very good, but I suggest adding another somewhere on your plot. It will ad to the theme. also, the ground is very flat, so I recommend adding hills and holes to make it more realistic. Last thing, if you add the leaves you have on the barn around your plot, it might match the build and give it some character.
- Fix these few things and you are good to go! <3
- -Tayter_Kat
- P.S. I really like your animal faces, and it is a very legit horse XD
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