OK I’ve been through it …. We were trying to get over happiness, friendly environment, individual attention, pastoral care and facilities.

- Slide 1:  More summery photo? I think put the “Encouraging every individual to …. Etc” from slide 2 on this one
- Do you know if we have permissions on the meeting new friends etc pictures (I was going to say bonding images but that sounded a little weird!)
- In the old presentation, I know the teacher has left but I quite like the caption: “Stand back while your teacher blows up a jelly baby!” Have we got any other photo we could put in there?
- Slide 6: Move to Slide 11…. Replace with willow walk image -  think the kids like the look of it?
- Presumably slide 8 will just be images? I think the order should be 8,9, 7
- So we have kids running, then the new science image (11) …I actually think the image we had before of just the top of the student’s head looking like he’s concentrating is a good one for showing concentration and learning. The library one (your current 11)  always looked a little staged….unless we have any others? Perhaps the one on the web site with Natalie – individual attention? And also this one of a year 7 enjoying class? (Not sure where this was from…)
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- Slide 16: BYOD – I have the attached ones which could make up 4 on one page? I think we just wanted to get over the Secure, filtered internet for students and free subscription to Office 365 for every student – forget anything else. Take off the BYOD header and just put BYOD in funky font???
- Possibly too many overseas photos – remember Patrick wanted an image of the BBQ or something that wasn’t going to cost parents thousands? Or would that be Marchant Hill – in which case take off the heading so it looks like we do this all the time!!! I’ve always loved this photo you took:


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Perhaps do one slide of overseas phots (4) and one of “cheap” options??!

Slide 27 – maybe take off the footer with twiiter/facebook etc??
Slide 28 – change font
Slide 29 – maybe put this after the academic photos – so talking about concentrating and learning – and see the results?
Slide 30 – delete BUT possibly but in a one liner on Slide 29 – OFSTED: Outstanding since 2009
Slide 31: Group photo of Pastoral team
Slide 32: Can we add another charity one – maybe that Pudsey bear staff one with Matt etc….raised £xxxx for charity in 2016/7
Slide 33: Have we got any other teachers you’ll remember shots? Shame we can’t use a couple of stills from the video you and Sarah took??! I also woder whether we should have this after the slide which was “Teachers you can talk to”?
Slide 34: Put this one after the school site images?
Slide 35: Open Events – all of them. Possibly put a curious about image or 2 here? Take off address etc Head it “Come and see us!”