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Wafelz' Novice Review

Jul 2nd, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. First, let me talk a bit about your terrain. The lower section of your terrain could be raised in areas. A lot of it is very flat, however you've managed to cover it up pretty well with the use of other blocks you've included in the grass. I also like the atmosphere you've created with the cobblestone walls, and I love the cave! It's pretty adorbs and fits nicely on the plot! All I think needs to be done with the terrain is raise some areas - like the hills you already have, but a few more, and more spread across the land, not just small hills (if that makes sense)
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  5. Secondly, organics. Your trees are pretty good; you have a good shape to them (the trunks), but they really need branches and roots, or at least visible branches! Also, remember you have world edit now, so you can //brush sphere the leaves onto the trees - just make sure you use a high percentage of air in the brush.
  6. E.g. //br sphere 90%air,10%leaves 3
  7. That's what I tend to use a lot. That gives less of a 'sphere' look to the leaves, and makes it look a lot more natural, as you can see the branches like in real life :3
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  9. Lastly, structure. You have a nice amount of structure on this plot, and really nice detail on all of the structures! The structure in the middle is perfectly fine, however the roofs on the others (not the dock area) are a little simple, and I wouldn't make them out of slabs. I feel like slabs just make the roof look a little too flat in comparison to the rest of the structure. Try using full blocks instead. Also, the structure with the birch roof and stone slab walls is way too plain, and lacks detail and a creative roof style. I'd suggest restarting that one; could I suggest making it a tall tower?
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  11. Good luck!
  12. - Dutty :3
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