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2017-11-17 TOEFL: sample writing, speaking 3

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  1. Greg Malivuk
  2. http://www.pastebin.com/u/gmalivuk - notes from all classes
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  4. Skim the six sample essays to the first writing prompt from yesterday.
  5. With your partner, decide what score (0-5) each sample response would probably get.
  6. (DELTA p. 419 has a description of the score levels.)
  7. essay 1: 3 - two supporting points, not very well developed; some grammar problems interfere with understanding; lots of missing subjects (especially “it”); little variety in vocabulary
  8. essay 2: 0 - it mostly repeats words and phrases from the prompt
  9. essay 3: 4 - missing articles and other small grammar mistakes; points aren’t developed enough
  10. essay 4: 2 - clear thesis and some support for each main point; the support is not well developed and there are a lot of grammar problems
  11. essay 5: 5 - well organized; just two supporting points but they have good development; missing subject “Is more fun”, but it only happens once instead of being a repeated mistake like essay 1
  12. essay 6: 1 - basically no development of the supporting points; serious language errors make it hard to understand
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  14. independent clauses can be joined in these ways:
  15. Clause. Clause.
  16. Clause; clause.
  17. Clause(,) [coordinating conjunction] clause.
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  19. coordinating conjunctions = for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so (FANBOYS)
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  21. Homework: If you want more than basic comments (a score and a sentence or two) on yesterday’s writing, email me over the weekend with what you think your scores would be on both essays and give a short explanation of why
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  23. Speaking Section: third section, after the 10-minute break; about 20 minutes total; six tasks
  24. 1 independent, open-ended - 15 seconds to prepare / 45 seconds to speak
  25. 2 independent, choice - 15/45
  26. 3 integrated reading/listening/speaking, campus announcement and conversation - 30/60
  27. 4 integrated R/L/S, academic text and lecture - 30/60
  28. 5 integrated L/S, conversation about a problem and solutions - 20/60
  29. 6 integrated L/S, academic lecture - 20/60
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  31. DELTA p. 286-7 - Take 45 seconds to read the notice. Then listen to the conversation. What is the man’s opinion? Why?
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  33. BREAK
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  35. A typical response to task 3 will have these parts:
  36. 1 Summarize the announcement
  37. 2 State the speaker’s opinion
  38. 3 Lead-in (“He gives two reasons for this opinion.”)
  39. 4 First reason
  40. 5 Detail/Example
  41. 6 Second reason
  42. 7 Detail/Example
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  44. DELTA p. 291 “Childcare on Campus”
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  46. Read and listen to the announcement and conversation on ETS 2 test 5.
  47. Take 5 minutes to prepare a “perfect” response with your partner.
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  49. Give your response to your partner for ETS 1 tests 1 and 2.
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  51. Record your responses to ETS 2 tests 1-3.
  52. Listen to your recordings and decide which one we can hear as a class.
  53. Listen to your classmates’ responses. Did they include all the parts? Were they easy to understand?
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  55. Homework: If you want more than basic comments (a score and a sentence or two) on yesterday’s writing, email me over the weekend with what you think your scores would be on both essays and give a short explanation of why
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