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- Hello KFCCriz, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot...
- Structure:
- This is anything like houses to barns to castles. You have some structures but they are missing depth. Depth is the layers within a structure. You can add depth by incorporating slabs, stairs, and fences into or onto your build. You can also add trap doors and buttons to add a bit of detail. If you need an example of depth, visit /warp depthtutorial.
- Organics:
- This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have some trees, but they are shaped like notch trees, a.k.a bonemealed trees. I recommend getting rid of the trees and make different trees. USE YOUR CREATIVITY!!! make it any shape you want, but make sure it is proportional and that the leaves flow we.. so the tree looks realistic.
- Terrain:
- This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. You have terrain but its really flat. I recommend adding more hills and craters to your plot to make it less flat.
- Other:
- This is anything that does not fit into the three previous categories. One thing I would fix is the palette on your plot. Palette is the blocks you choose to build something that fit a certain theme. You have a random palette that does not fit well together. For example, the ice trees don't fit very well with the desert theme house.
- fix the things mentioned above and your good to go! Good Luck<3
- Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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