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- Hey there!
- So first of all, a bit about your terrain. I actually really like it! I think it's vibrant - I love all the colours and the style is great. I love the diversity between the cliffs and the peeks. It's really really nice.
- Secondly, your organics, which you actually have none of. Maybe something on top of the cliff could be nice - a tall pine tree, or a tree hanging over the edge of the cliff could be nice :3
- Lastly, your structure. The structure you've shown is okay, but the 'checkerboarding' stairs as detail doesn't look nice. However, I do like the interior of the mineshaft, it's nice ^.^
- You're also going to need some more structure on this plot, either something small on the top of the cliff, or something similar to the Mineshaft opening.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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