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  1. [adm][quote="Dexterity"]Well all it means is that they can make a barrier as strong as their tier would allow them to. It's the easiest way to explain it without trying to get into details.[/quote]
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  3. Expert, at the max.
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  5. For reference:
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  7. [quote]Untrained
  8. Beginner
  9. Trained
  10. Adept
  11. Experienced
  12. Advanced
  13. [b]Expert[/b]
  14. Elite
  15. Master
  16. Grandmaster[/quote]
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  20. [quote]Well it was always meant to be more effective against the non-physical types. I could fix it although turning it into a plain shield. Also the activation requirement is no big deal.[/quote]
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  22. Turn it into a standard shield, include an activation requirement, and remove the excerpt of them being immune to all forms of lingering status effects.
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  26. [quote]A lit candle is somewhat over 1000 degrees Kelvin. How much do you propose I lower this and still be effective in the 0 tier range?[/quote]
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  28. You're using the wrong measurement. You've switched from Fahrenheit to Kelvin. I would like all of the measurements changed to Fahrenheit, as it not only makes this more consistent, but also makes it easier for me to understand. Also, I will mention that this will not be a 0-tier at the end of this. So, I would like you to change this to be around 5,000 - 6,000 Fahrenheit.
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  32. [quote]Lowering the temperature to 1 million sound fine?[/quote]
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  34. No. A couple hundred thousand at best.
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  36. [quote]"Incinerate everything it passes through with ease" was more to make the ability sound intimidating, I'll remove it.[/quote]
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  38. Thank you.
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  40. [quote]Humans are already firing sniper rounds in the kilometers so how much do you propose I lower this?[/quote]
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  42. 1 - 2 miles at best.
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  44. [quote]'Can't be redirected' is a drawback. It is there to ensure that the NPC can't control the trajectory of their Holy Arrow as Quincies can do, just as it says in the previous ability.[/quote]
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  46. I would prefer this be reworded so that it more directly refers to the fact that they can't control the trajectory.
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  50. [quote]What range do you propose? Also light is weightless; if there is a drawback then it should be something else entirely.[/quote]
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  52. 100 meters at max. Additionally, if this thing can extend to that length, then the cutting power should be heavily reduced.
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  56. [quote]I will remove this, more because as the years go by the less I like this weapon.[/quote]
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  58. Ok, thank you, makes this easier.[/adm]
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