Tayter_Kat

PVP_Power_

Jul 28th, 2015
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  1. Hello PVP_Power_, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your Novice plot....
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from towers to houses to market stalls. Your house is alright, but it could use more depth. Depth is the layers within a structure. You can add depth to a build by incorporating fences, stairs, and slabs. You can add some detail to the sides of structures by adding trap doors and buttons. If you need and example of depth, try visiting /warp depthtutorial. This gives you bad examples and one example of how to add some. Be creative and make your own!
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like animals and trees. Your organics are good for a novice plot. Great job here!!!!
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. Your terrain has a good intentions, but it needs to be worked on. The major thing your need to fix is that it looks to much like stairs. Try making it more uneven and rigid. Real terrain had no pattern. make it flow and have no rhyme or reason.
  9. Other:
  10. This is anything I cannot fix into the three previous categories. One thing your plot could be worked on is that there are a lot of open areas on your plot. This could be filled with structures, more organics, or make some different terrain. I suggest filling these spots before submitting again.
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  12. Good Luck<3
  13. Tayter_Kat
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