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- ### List of Dialogue Changes ###
- ## Common ##
- - Age Changes
- Itsuki 18 -> 17
- Tsubasa 18 -> 17
- Touma 18 -> 17
- Ellie 17 -> 16
- Yashiro 19 -> 18
- - Item Names/Descriptions
- Nan-no Special -> Young Rabbits Special
- Nan-no -> Young Rabbits
- Tiki@Street -> Tiki@Gravure
- - Advertisements
- A lot of the advertisements on Posters or on TV contain text mentioning the
- gravure magazine Young Rabbits featuring Ellie, Tsubasa and Maiko.
- ## Movie ##
- - In the intro movie, a newspaper article was changed to correct Tsubasa's age
- from 13 to 12.
- ## Events ##
- -----------
- | Chapter 2 |
- -----------
- - Itsuki reads a magazine about gravure models (2 lines redone)
- - Tsubasa's next work is for a gravure magazine (7 lines redone)
- The lines include Tsubasa being to shy to tell Itsuki what her new job is and
- Maiko explaining that it's a swimsuit shoot.
- - Follow up conversation (2 player choice altered, almost entirely rewritten)
- Tsubasa says a swimsuit is too embarrasing and Itsuki has two dialogue options
- "Then, how about I tag along?"
- "You'd look great in any swimsuit."
- Tsubasa refuses Itsuki's offer to tag along, but Maiko lies to her and tells
- her that Kiria will be participating too, which makes Tsubasa fantasize about
- standing on a stage together with Kiria and gets her lost in thought.
- - Tsubasa leaves, Maiko reveals her lies and Touma wants to drag Itsuki to the
- photo shooting (player choices were cut, total rewrite)
- Tsubasa leaves and Maiko reveals that she lied and Kiria's shooting was just
- for her new song and in a Jacket not in a bikini. Touma enters the room and
- asks what's going on, when he hears about the gravure shooting he wants to go
- and watch. He wants to drag Itsuki along, who has two dialogue option
- "Have a safe trip."
- "Won't we just be a nuisance?"
- In both cases Touma accuses Itsuki of not being a true man and Itsuki accuses
- Touma of not going there to cheer on Tsubasa but because he only wants to see
- models in swimsuits. Maiko then talks about her past as a gravure model and
- about how the same photographer she worked with is now doing the shooting.
- Itsuki and Touma remember the article about missing gravure models.
- - Talk with Mr. Hatanaka in the office 1 (10 lines redone)
- Touma mentions that he was not able to get in to watch the gravure shoot, but
- says that it was cancelled and that he saw Tsubasa among the other girls.
- - Talk with Tsubasa after the shoot (player choices were cut, slight rewrite)
- Tsubasa says how she made the photographer mad and it was all her fault that
- the shooting was cancelled, and how she caused trouble to the other models as
- well because of that. Itsuki has two dialogue options
- "So that's how it went..."
- "Everyone makes mistakes"
- Both lead to Tsubasa saying she will give it her all next time, then Itsuki
- tells her to be careful around the photographer and that mirages might be
- involved
- - Itsuki refers to gravure models in the idolasphere (1 line redone)
- - First confrontation with the photographer in the idolasphere, he talks about
- gravure modeling (4 lines redone)
- - After Yashiro's performance, he tells Tsubasa to work harder on captivating
- the audience (3 line redone)
- - Talk with Mr. Hatanaka in the office 2 (5 lines redone)
- He says how Maiko's photobook enthralled the man of Japan even though it
- wasn't a nude photobook and that Maiko and Horinozawa have been a great duo
- and created "My Complex" together.
- - The cast finds "My Complex" (player choices were cut, total rewrite)
- Touma is drooling over the artbook and getting a nosebleed. Tsubasa has a look
- at the photo book as well. Itsuki has two dialogue options
- "Are you getting any inspiration?"
- "I'm sure you can do it, Tsubasa."
- In the meantime, Touma has become totally absorbed in the magazine and when
- they try to get him away from it he says that he couldn't help it and no guy
- could resist this, saying that Maiko looks like she's lowering her guard in
- the pictures. Tsubasa says no wonder Horinozawa got angry at her because she
- was just so embarrassed and wanted to get over with the shoot fast, just
- following instructions. She finds new resolve to not run away from the camera
- anymore. She then asks Itsuki to help come up with the poses. Itsuki tells her
- to do it sexier and more soulful.
- - Tsubasa still thinks it's embarrasing but she has to do it (1 line redone)
- - Encounter with Horinozawa, before the boss battle (11 lines redone)
- Horinozawa comments on the swimsuit and how it fits Tsubasa perfectly with
- her newfound attitude. Touma is a bit of a perv and can't unfix his gaze.
- - After the boss battle, mentions of gravure modeling (2 lines redone)
- - During the modeling session with Ellie, Maiko and Tsubasa (1 player choice
- altered, along with the lines involving it)
- Tsubasa asks Itsuki how the shooting was, he has one dialogue option
- "Could have used a little more skin."
- When saying this Tsubasa says they couldn't use her pictures for the magazine
- if she did that and that it would be a serious problem if she showed more skin
- Itsuki says Maiko and Horinozawa seem to be pleased so it must've been okay.
- - Itsuki is introduced to Ellie and mentions the gravure shoot (1 line redone)
- -----------
- | Chapter 3 |
- -----------
- - Barry borrows Mamori's "phone charger" in the scene at the beginning of the
- chapter with Mamori, Barry, Itsuki and Maiko, this was changed back to borrowing
- her "handkerchief". (5 lines redone)
- - The gravure magazine is referenced (5 lines redone)
- Ellie tells Tsubasa that the magazine they were in is sold out completely and
- says it's no wonder because she posed there herself in a bikini.
- -----------
- | Chapter 4 |
- -----------
- - Tsubasa gets a new job as "Sneeze Detective Maho" (1 player choice altered,
- 2 lines redone)
- Itsuki has the dialogue option
- "Maybe that gravure modeling helped"
- -----------
- | Chapter 5 |
- -----------
- - Muse Fes started and Itsuki goes to check on Tsubasa (1 player choice
- altered, 10 lines redone)
- Itsuki has the dialogue option
- "You're not in a swimsuit?"
- Tsubasa responds by asking Itsuki if he asks because he liked it but he says
- he just figured she'd have to wear it again. Tsubasa says she's on break right
- now so she can relax and walk around normally.
- -----------
- | Chapter 6 |
- -----------
- - Maiko announces her retirement and continuation of her gravure modeling career
- (3 lines redone)
- --------------
- | Side Stories |
- --------------
- - The topic announcement for Barry side stories had a typo, it read "A new side
- story in now available", this was fixed.
- - On Tsubasa's first side story she practices for her meet-and-greet event by handing
- out "freebies", that was changed back to handing out "tissues". (5 lines redone)
- - Some of the side stories had dialogue changes, like Tsubasa mentioning her age
- in some occasions. Luckily the original files also included the correct
- translations so nothing had to be changed here. It might have been leftovers
- from before they started to change things.
- - Ayaha second side story were she is worried about a writer had a grammatical error,
- it read "hasn't been able to making any progress", the word "make" was used instead
- of "making".
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