halo_puppy's Spark Review!

Hi halo_puppy! I'm HeyItsElla, a junior mod on sunfury!

So, to pass to Ember in Sunfury, you need to meet three criteria. You need to show a degree of skill in: Terrain, Organics and Structure.

Terrain- The terrain in a plot is the enviroment the plot is based on. This can be simple such as a hill with a field next to it, or large complicated mountains with twists and turns and deep caves. This could also be a desert or the jungle, or even a huge lake.

Organics- The organics in a plot are all things natural that are in a plot. Most commonly these are tree's, bushes and flowers, which is fine! Sometimes if you have a larger plot, you can put animals and humans in your plot. It takes a bit more skill to do the humans and animals, so for a spark I'd focus on some nicely formed tree's.

Structure- The structure in a plot is the man made things. Most people hear the word structure and think of buildings such as houses, cabins, cottages and even sky scrapers. This is all good, but also smaller details such as arch ways, statues and the like would compliment the buildings well.

I'd suggest rethinking the idea of your plot and changing it to better show off your skills. Your plot at the moment doesn't really make sense, and I didn't really understand it. The terrain also needs more improvement, so to be totally fair I would clear it and restart with a new idea and a new story.

~HeyItsElla