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- Hello there, i'm Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your Initiate plot...
- Buildings:
- The outside looks nice, but the inside, otherwise interior, needs work. try adding carpets and more chairs. even a floor will make a big difference.
- Organics/Terrain:
- The outside is lacking a lot, try adding hills and holes and other crevices to make the ground look more real. you can also add hand-made trees to add to the plot. other simple things like pathways and lamps will even make the hotel match the exterior.
- Work on these and you'll do great as a Novice!
- -Tayter_Kat
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