Tayter_Kat

SlimMilkshake

Jun 28th, 2015
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  1. Hello SlimeMilkshake, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to market stalls. Your plot has depth, but there is a lot going on, its to distracting. Depth is the layer within a build/wall that give it realism. You can keep the build, because it has depth, but id would suggest taking a few things off the building.
  5. organics:
  6. This is anything on the plot that is living, like trees and flower. You have spawned in trees using bone meal and saplings, and these will not help you rank up. It is recommended you build custom(hand-made) trees instead. Make sure they trunk isn't to thick or skinny and matches the leaves. The leaves should also flow well, instead of boxy leaves. on a stick.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is the ground, like caves, cliffs, and craters. Your terrain is very flat, so I suggest adding some hills and craters all around your plot to make it more realistic and add to the atmosphere. Make sure it is smooth instead of a rough terrain.
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  10. Good Luck<3
  11. -Tayter_Kat
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