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- Hello everybody. Trader CYOA Anon here, I told you all I was going to continue my story today, but before I do I want to address some things that have come up with it.
- First, the deal with Maybell and Recca. I will just come out and say it, yes I do in fact like bigger women. Now usually it's 2D because it's more romanticized to not have the common turn offs but I should know better than to push it. I am deeply sorry, it was a bad call on my part, even more so to attempt push it onto the other girls.
- That being said, I am NOT retconing the choice to give Recca some health/chub. I swear she won't get to Maybell's level (which by the way is not 'morbidly obese' like one person said, Morbidly obese to me is 300 pounds with stomach hanging halfway down her thighs, but that's me).
- I am not retconing on the basis that if I do it once because someone complained about it enough they'd do it all the time. I promise for henceforth I won't add anymore chubby chase options, but Recca will most likely have some love handles separating her human/spider halves.
- Second I want to address the combat aspect of my story, and gary stu claims. I am not that great a writer, I will admit it, but on the subject of calling the anon character a Gary Stu, if you're calling him a Gary Stu because he's a self insert...well that's kinda the point, it's why he's called Anon. If you're calling him a Gary Stu because of my poor ability at writing combat, well okay that is my fault. I had to basically decide between the lesser of two evils, where he gets stronger quicker than a normal person realistically would and win fights he probably shouldn't be able to, or we'd be weak and constantly losing fights and taking realistic training times/regiments which slows the pace down. I'm sorry if my choice doesn't appeal to you I just had two options and picked the one I hoped would be more entertaining.
- I'm just trying to have fun with this thing, and if you guys have problems feel free to say it.
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