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- Novice Review:
- Nice plot so far, but theres some stuff i think you should work on before ranking up!
- Terrain:
- Other than that one sliver of raised terrain, there isnt much variation to the terrain anywhere else on the plot. Try to make more levels and more dynamic terrain before you resubmit. Also, the amount of different blocks in the ground is a little too busy on the eyes. Try to have one block more prominent than the rest to give your eyes a rest.
- Organics:
- The organics on the plot are okay, but they def need some work. Your serpent in the middle of the plot has a good shape, but its very rough and blocky. Smooth it out more and make it seem more fluid. Work on the head as well, its pretty much the same size of the body, so make sure to have some definition. Be careful of having the face too flat as well. Also, its' tail is inside your terrain, and that makes no sense. Your trees are okay, but they could use a higher percentage of air in your brush when you make them. Having more air in the brush makes your trees fluffier and more tree-like.
- Structure:
- Your structures are fine, but theyre all very small and theyre all cut in half. Make a bigger, more complete structure so we can see that youre capable as a builder. They've got decent depth and detail, theyre just too small so please work on that.
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