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- Aspirant review:
- Id like to start this off by saying that I know this is a "recreation" of Pompeii and this is just my builders perspective. In no way am i going to review this plot based off irl stuffs \o/
- ANYWHO! Lets get on with it :D
- The terrain for the volcano is a bit rough so try to smooth it out a bit. I like your idea of the lava coming up and out if the volcano doe :D v cool :p
- The structures on the plot seem unsupported and kinda flat so make sure you add different layers to them to create depth!
- The trees look decent also, but try to give them more leafage so that theyre proportional to the trunks!
- If youre doing statues, make them bigger and more detailed so that they can count as organics, no everyone is great at organics so dw about getting them perfect, just try your best!
- Overall good plot but its just not there yet! Aspirant to apprentice is a hard process but keep at it :D
- good luck!
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