Vampire Kanagi quotes json review

Awaken3 (22)
As a magical girl@ and someone who has witnessed many deaths,
--> I'd move this up to the motion before this (from autoTurnFirst 0.1 to 2.5). The line after this seems fine to keep where it is though.


First Login (24)
It's true that I am now dressed as a weird vampire...
--> add a linebreak somewhere, probably after "now"
--> I'd also move this up and combine it with where "Fufu, don't worry." is


Login2 Morning (25)
(My suggestion for where the text goes for this quote):

"autoTurnFirst": 3 = Good morning. It's a beautiful morning.
"autoTurnFirst": 0.8, 1.5, & 1.8 = Oh, no, I'm a vampire now.
(seems fine where it is rn) "autoTurnFirst": 0.1 & 3.5 = This is no time for carefree talk like this.
"autoTurnFirst": 1.2 & 4 = Gwah! It's painful!


Login3 Noon (26)
It's painful!
--> I'd move this up and put it with the "Ouch!" line before this.
--> I also feel like at this part (autoTurnFirst 2.3), she's saying something like "...Not!"

I'm not going to be able to do this until dinner time!
--> add a line break after "able"


Login4 Evening (27)
(Add the textClear command at the end of this, the subs didn't go away.)


Login5 Night (28)
Huh...
--> I think this is more of a "*Yawn*"

It seems that vampires are going to be active from now on.
--> add a line break after "going"

due to their work
--> I'd combine this with the "masters live" line before this (but if you combine it, you probably have the put a line break before "due".)


Login6 Other (29)
a magical girl, a vampire...
--> move this up and put it with the "high school girl, maid" line before this (and probably put a line break after "maid")


Login8 BP (31)
(Suggestion for where the text goes):
"autoTurnFirst": 8.2 = Vampires are not meant to be reflected@in mirrors, but it seems that my@Endless Mirrors self is also in this form.
autoTurnFirst": 2.8 & 3 = I'll give you a moment before it @destroys your childhood notions.


Tap1 (33)
Hmm, tricks by innocent children are always cute.
--> add a line break somewhere (maybe after "children")

Oops
--> add either a comma or period at the end
--> move this down and put it with the "little girl" line


Tap3 (35)
In other words, their true identity is...!
--> move this down one motion (from autoTurnFirst 3.2 to 3)


Tap5 (37)
(This is more of a translation nitpick but, Kanagi is talking about Karin here [she calls her Gahaku / Artist]. So I think this should be more like):

"autoTurnFirst": 4.7 = It's dazzling to see Artist doing@everything she can to do what she loves.
"autoTurnFirst": 4.6 = I've always been desperate to live.
"autoTurnFirst": 2.8 & 2.5 = Her way of life is carefree @and I want to follow her example.


Tap6 (38)
The surname Togame reminds me of a cross somehow.
--> add a line break somewhere (maybe after "Togame")

I think she played a good and kind @and sincere sister who does not@ disgrace her name.
--> move this up and combine it with where the "However," line is


Tap7 (39)
(After the Hmm line, move everything up by one motion like so):

"autoTurnFirst": 5.4 = A, E, I, U, E, O, A, O.
"autoTurnFirst": 3.4 = Hmm, this is about as easy as it gets.
"autoTurnFirst": 3.4 = Okay, let's level up!
"autoTurnFirst": 2.3 & 3 = Nya, Nee, Nyu, Nee, Nyo, Nya, Nyo.


Tap9 (41)
(Translation nitpick again, but I think Kanagi's talking about the clothes she's wearing, not Mitama's clothes. So I think it should be more like):

"autoTurnFirst": 1.2 = Achoo!
"autoTurnFirst": 1 & 2.3 = Ugh...it's a bit chilly...
"autoTurnFirst": 6.4 = It's already November.@Yakumo, these clothes are too light/thin!
"autoTurnFirst": 1 = Okay,
"autoTurnFirst": 3 = I'll put a disposable body warmer on my back.