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- Hello Sinus46!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
- Your structure is lacking depth, detail, and color. (essential factors to a structure) Try to incorporate slabs/stairs to add detail and possibly color to your structure. You basically only used cobblestone in your entire structure. Also, push in the walls for depth. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial for extra help. If u cant warp, ask a higher rank or staff to tp u there. Try to make your flags look more 3D instead of flat which it is rn.
- Your trees are bonemealed which are shamed upon. Remove them and restart with custom trees. Dont forget to add the branches and roots for detail and realism.
- Your terrain is flat and lifeless. The lava moat doesnt really go well with the grass interior terrain. You basically added random grass blocks on the floor making it seem like they are hills, but they arent. Adding actual hills/mountains will increase your chances of ranking. Also add block variation to your terrain such as green clay, cobblestone, gravel, etc.
- Your plot needs a lot of work before I can rank you up to novice. I suggest restarting because the castle walls limit the amount of things you can add to your plot. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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