Olden Era Notes

3:02 did you make the crayon design doc yourself? because it's hilarious
4:05 This summary works much better, and it's funny
6:28-7:17 My instinct is to cut down on the length of the clips where you're not talking. In fact, you could even take out this section entirely, and go straight from "How does it look?" to "The game is deliberately evocative..." You know when you're having a conversation with someone, and then there's this uncomfortable silence? This sort of felt like that.
12:10 Top-tier joke
16:46 There's something about the way the composite blends together that's very satisfying
24:29 walrus lol
31:02 I feel like the in-game volume should be slightly higher during this battle
41:01 The travel brochure transition, using the blur to simulate focus, was very effective, and I watched this a few times to scrutinize how you did it

Overall, great work! I can tell how much effort you put into it, and I'm sure fans of the series will dig it even more than me.