2014-10-10 Workshop: writing corrections

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If your story is about the past, use past verbs.

(In some sentences, you must use the base form or gerund.)
* The monkeys decided to stole some fruit.
                      to steal (always to + base form)

* The monkey saw the woman left her bag on the table.
			leave/leaving

* When he was in the kitchen drunk milk, he saw Shen.
                            drinking
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They closed the windows. (subject)
Shu met his monkey friends and talked with them. (object)
The people put them in a zoo. (object)
The people closed their windows. (possessive)
They're closing the windows. (they+are contraction)

The monkeys enjoyed life there. (location)
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She saw a monkey in a tree.
The monkey jumped down from the tree and stole her bag.

They wanted to move to another city. (all to the same city)
They wanted to move to other cities. (to different cities)
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monkey thief: a type of thief who is a monkey
thief monkey: a type of monkey who is a thief

monkey thieves
thief monkeys (only the last word is plural)

pet cat, pet dog, pet monkey
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runaway dog: a pet dog who left his home
stray dog: a dog that never had a home (dogs usually have one)
wild bear: a bear that lives in the forest