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- Novice Review:
- Decent plot, but theres just some things i think you should work on before you rank up!
- The aspects of your plot (terrain, structure and organics) are all decent for this level, but there needs to be more on the plot.
- Play with your terrain as much as you want to! You have world edit now so its much easier to do! Get creative with it and add more levels to your plot to break up the generally flat land.
- your structures as i said, are good, but theres some stuff to consider with them.
- Where your roof detailing is decent, the roofs arent big enough for the houses. Be practical, if it rains on that roof, the rain will just seep in to the walls :p
- Its good to keep practical like that with building, but it doesnt always have to be exactly like real life!
- Your trees are good, but theyre all generally the same size. Add some variation to them in size and shape!
- Finally, theres too much empty space on the plot! Fill up the plot as much as you can, be it terrain, organics or structure, just fill it up! x3
- Good luck!
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