A Good Adventure

FADE IN
1.	INT.  SERENIC VEIW ON 1950’S STYLED TOWN
Big fonts are in front of comfy 1950’s styled town. “1952, Arizona”.  Town is seen from a very high hill/mountain. Camera pulls back reveling the back side of a dark   male figure. He is very tall and menacing. Next panel shows a super close up of man’s face. Face is dark and cannot be fully seen.
MYSTERY MAN:
“Taking this town will be the first step in putting our master plan into motion.”

We see the same view of the town but everything is darker with heavy shading, including the sun.

	CUT TO
2. 	INT. CLASS ROOM
Panel revels a side view of a short nerdy student wearing a bow tie and glasses. He is standing in front of the teacher’s desk. The teacher is a fat man with bolding hair and a bored, lazy expression. He is leaning back on his chair looking straight at the student. The teacher, student, and the desk are in the panel.
HENRY REIDS:
“Mr. Ratgutter I’d like to ask about my test again.”

MR. RATGUTTER:
“Henry we’ve been over this, it’s out of my hands there’s nothing I can do. If I could do something I would but it’s simply out of my power. Now if you have any more problems please contact admin about it.”

	Henry pushes up on his glasses and looks more meekly then before

HENRY REIDS
“Yes sir. But you see this is the third time you’ve lost my test. I’ve contacted admin but
 They told me this is a problem I need to discus between my teacher.”


Torso high close up to Mr. Ratgutter. His face turns angry with his lips jutted out. He is now standing up, lening his heavy body at Henry. He has his right hand on the desk and his left hand pointing hard at Henry. He snarls and spits a little while he speaks

MR. RATGUTTER:
“HENRY! Get the feathers out of your head birdbrain. I told you before I didn’t lose your test. They simply went missing. I have hundreds of students to look after. Do think I have the time to check up on every student and all of their problems? I have other responsibilities you know. It’s pretty arrogant and self centered to think you’re the only student with problems. I can’t give you special treatment. That would be unfair for the other students. So this will be the LAST time you start making such wild accusations or you’ll be losing a lot more than just a few test, GOT IT?”

Close up to Mr. Ratgutter’s “inner face” it’s an even more revolting image then his real face

MR.RATGUTTER:
“That little shit. If it wasn’t for him I wouldn’t be in this mess right now. It was only a couple weeks since he caught me peeping on the girls swim team and he still has the gall to talk to me like this. It took me all of my owed favorers, backdoor connections, and a little blackmailing to keep my job. But now I can’t even look at a girl without raising a red flag. I’m the king around here. Anyone who opposes the king get’s it. I’ll make sure this little shit never makes it out of this school. He’ll end up a bum on the streets, and then he’ll know not to mess with me anymore.

Henry is visibly mad but looks down. Panel shows upper chest high close up with downward cast.

HENRY:
“Yes sir.”

Henry head turns a bit but before he can turn around a hand appears on his shoulder making Henry look up. It’s the protagonist Johnny B. Good. We see Good from Henry’s point of view. A 45 upwards look. With his whole torso and up in view.

GOOD:
“OH LOOK! Mr. Ratgutter I’ve been looking everywhere for you. I’ve tried the girl’s locker room, the janitor’s closet. I even couldn’t find you behind the dumpster smoking cigarettes and looking at dirty magazines. But what a surprise seeing you here at your desk, and doing your job no less. Looks like a even greasy bean like you can do something right once in a while”

Good has a smug lift up face during his introduction. His arms make huge extravagant poses as he says it. Making sure anyone nearby is paying attention to him. Cut to Mr. Ratgutter’s fuming at the mouth.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“Watch it goody-two-shoes. One more word from you and I’ll report both of you to the office I’ll and make sure the both of you will be sitting on cacti for the rest of the school year.”

Cut back to Henry with a surprised look, his finger pointed at himself

HENRY
“Me to, but I didn’t do anything?”

MR. RATGUTTER:
“Quiet tiny tim! Back to your desk, NOW! As for you Mr. Good.”

(Mr. Ratgutter snarls as he says Good)

“I expect a ten page apology by tomorrow. If you can do that I might consider letting you stay in school. On the condition that you might have to do me a few favors of course.”

Good gives a shrug while producing a small deck of papers in his hand.


GOOD:
“I’d imagine it would be hard to make me do anything after you’ve been fired.”

Good tosses the wrinkly papers on the desk. Mr. Ratgutter picks them up with a quick nerves look on his face. He slams the papers on the desk.

MR.RATGUTTER:
“Where did you find these?”

Top down zoom of the papers showing all three missing test. Good leans over with a grin on his face and a pointing finger. (side view) (waist high)



GOOD:
“I found them in the dumpster where you threw them away. You should be more careful when trying to hid evidence of your crimes.”

MR. RATGUTTER:
“This is outrages! You have no proof that I threw them away. For all we know YOU threw them away. If you think about it you probably did do it. How else would you have known where the tests were?”

GOOD:
“If these tests aren’t enough then what if I said I have a couple of students who saw you throw them away. I’d imagine a couple of eye witness accounts are more than enough evidence.”

Mr. Ratgutter slams his fists on the desk. Panel shows a up wards angle of him shoulder up.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“You should pay more attention in class. Haven’t you’ve heard of circumstantial evidence. All you can prove is that I was cleaning up the school by throwing away trash left behind from lazy students, like you.”

	Back to a close up of Good smugly grinning. upwards

GOOD:
“If you really wanted to take out the garbage you should have thrown yourself into the dumpster. “

	Panel is a up close of Mr. Ratgutter’s face now face is on even level angle.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“You’ve done it now.  Your goose is gonna get so cooked you’ll be crispy for a week. I’m reporting you to the office for trying to falsely accuse a teacher and for stealing Henry’s test.”

Henry perks up a little. Camera looks down at Henry with his face giving a slight hint of hope. Face, torso and waist is in view.

HENRY:
“So does this mean my test will be graded?”



MR. RATGUTTER:
“QUIT IT SHORT STACK! One more word and I’ll put you in the oven right alongside Good here.”

Panel Good with a wide shot holding a tape recorder. Hand with recorder is way up in the air with his other on his hip. His mouth is wide open with a aggressive smile


GOOD:
“Your goose will be whistling a different tune when you here this.”
	Zoom in on tape recorder.

TAPE RECORDER:
“I’ll make sure that little bird shit Henry regrets he ever messed with me. I’ll throw away his test and mark them down as missing. He’ll fail in no time and be out of my hair.

Show three panels. A close up of a shocked Henry, camera looking down. Close up of Good with a grin, camera looking up. A scared looked for Mr. Ratgutter, camera looking down also

MR. RATGUTTER:
“Tha…that still proves nothing. You can’t prove that was me saying it. You can’t be sure it was me in that recording it could have been anyone. The sound is so muffled you can’ really tell. Here give that to me.”

Mr. Ratgutter attempts to grab the recorder but it’s out of his reach. Good is taller than him. Good plays the tape again.

TAPE RECORDER:
“…Nobody messes with me, Mr. Slugborn Ratgutter. I’m the king around here. Mess with the king and you get the axe. I’d set my whole class on fire if it meant I could keep my job. Once Henry is out of the way I’ll climb my way up to top and fire everyone who even gave me a dirty look. I’ll be the god of this school. All the students and faculty will be my personal play things.”



MR. RATGUTTER:
“Fine, what is it you want? Money, free grades, I know some cute girls that owe me some favors, just name your price and we’ll forget about this ever happen. You don’t want me as your enemy.”

GOOD:
“You think you can bribe me? Not everyone is a grease ball like you. With this I’ll make sure you’ll never set foot in this school again. Better pack up your bags cause you ain’t never gonna see Kansas again, Dorthy.”

Mr. Ratgutter is deeply frightened with a shocked horrifying look at his face. The camera is now facing down on him. Not knowing what else to do he gets on his knees in front of Good with his hands clasp. Small tears begin to swell up in Mr. Ratgutter’s eyes.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“OH PLEASE, PLEASE, DON’T REPORT ME. I’ll do anything, please. I didn’t want to do this, you gotta believe me. I’m sick you see sick. When I was a school boy I was bullied. Everyday they’d kick and tease me until I was crying home. I couldn’t even stay in school it was so bad. I’m sorry I didn’t mean to hurt anyone I just felt so weak from all those years of torture. I thought I would feel better if I felt like the bigger man. I know it was a mistake now, you’ve showed me the errors of my ways. Thank you! Oh thank you, you god sent angle. Thank you. Good, you really are my best student you know that. So please just hand me the recorder and I’ll turn over a new leaf.
(As inner self)
That weak, milk drinkin mama’s boy, he can’t stand to see others in pain. So all I gotta do is shed a few tears, tell a sob story and he’ll give me exactly what I want. Such a pathetic loser, I almost pity the boy. Once I have the upper hand I’ll get rid of both of these clowns. Then I’ll get back to my nice comfy job, playing with my toys, and no one will be able to stop me. Nobody can beat the king.”

	Back to Henry who has a slight look of concern on his face

HENRY:
“Good, if he really is sick he might really need help. Firing him might be a little extreme. We could….”

	Good interrupts him.


GOOD:
“If he’s sick he should talk to Mrs. Help. She’s a pretty good school counselor once you get to know her. But I’d advise he schedule an appointment as soon as possible. I don’t think he’s going be here for very long.”

Good then quickly turn and walks out the door. Panel shows Good heroically walking out the door with Mr.Ratgutter on his knees reaching out his hand. Henry is looking at Good. The View is the opposite of what we have been seeing. Now the camera pointing to the left side.

(note: make sure to always point the camera upwards to Good making him powerful)

Scene ends with Mr. Ratgutter walking out of the school face with tears of anger. Holding a box of his stuff.

3. INT GOOD”S ROOM

	We see Good getting ready in the morning. Putting on hiking cloths and gear.

GOOD:
(to himself)
“Aww… Henry got his tests graded and Mr. Ratgutter got fired. I can’t imagine a better way to start the weekend.”

He leaves his going down stairs. He grabs his breakfast that has been prepared on the table and continues to walk away.

GOOD’S MOM:
“Sit down and eat with me at the table. You always leave as soon as possible. Never give me the time of day. At least ask to see how I’m doing. I could be suffering from horrible depression and you wouldn’t even know it.”

	Good stops and jogs in place.

GOOD:
“Sorry I gotta leave. I’m doing a hike up the mountains today so I need an early start.”



GOOD’S MOM:
What about your homework, shouldn’t you be focusing on your work. You’ll never be a big shot archeologist playing outside all day.

GOOD:
One, archeologist is a very demanding job and I need to stay fit. Two, a healthy body is a healthy mind. I can’t focus if I stayed cooped up all day. Three and most importantly, who does homework on a Saturday? Why waste a perfectly good Saturday when you can do it on a crummy Sunday.

Good puts up a finger for every point he makes. Holding up three fingers at the end. Then leaves without waiting for a response.

MOM:
He’s so much like his father.

	Mother looks over at picture of man in a military uniform.

If only he could be here now to see how much you’ve grown.

4. 	INT. SMALL MOUNTAIN

Good is hiking up a small mountain. He stops for a second and enjoys the high view from the town. (note: it’s the same spot the villain was standing in part one)
Good remarks.

GOOD:
“Nothing beats this view, this fresh air, the beautiful sounds of nature. It makes me want to stay here forever but at the same time it makes me want to see what other bits of beauty are out there in the world to explore.”

	Good goes back to hiking up the mountain. He comes to a small entrance to a cave.

GOOD:
”I’ve always wondered if anybody else uses this cave.But so far I think I might be the only one using this cave. I think better that way. This cave is my personal retreat. It’s a place I go to relax and be by myself. My safe place where it’s just me and my cave. Also I use it to hide my dirty magazines so there’s that to.”

GOOD blushes a little when he thinks about that last part. Good enters the cave but when he enters we see a shocked close up on Good’s face. A quick scream and Good quickly leaves the cave. He starts to breath heavily.

GOOD:
“My god….I never thought….but how.”

Good slowly enters the cave again and we see a couple of dead bodies laid out in the cave. Good stands there and inspects the bodies. The bodies are all naked apart from their undergarments and faces disfigured beyond recognition. All male.



GOOD:
“This can’t be real. Who could do this and why here and why in this town. I have to tell the police as soon as possible.”

Good runs down the maintain as fast as possible. He ends up on the side of the road. He then sees a police car driving down the road. He hails them down. Police stop by and exit the vehicle. The two police are Hispanic men with ugly, grunt faces.

GOOD:
Thank god you’re here. I saw something terrible up in the cave in the mountain. You need to report this quick.

COP 1:
Slow down amigo. Tell us what happen.

GOOD: I saw some dead bodies in a cave up there

	Good points up the mountain. Both cops then look at each other.

COP 1:
You said you saw dead bodies up there? Are you sure?

GOOD:
Yes, I’m sure. I know it’s hard to believe but it’s true I saw it.

COP 2: Does anyone else know about this? Is there anyone else with you?

GOOD:
No just me.

	Both cops look at each other again.


COP 1:
“Show us where it is we’ll take care of it.”

Good leads the cops up into the mountains. They all hike up with Good in front and the two cops behind.
GOOD:
“Boy I’m happy you guys were here I would have had to walk back to town then come back here. You really saved me a lot of trouble.”

COP 1 and 2:
“……”

GOOD:
“I haven’t seen you two before. You guys new?”

COP 1:
“Yea….new”

GOOD:
Well I hope we get to know each other more. I kinda know most of the cops around town.

COPS 1 and 2:
“…….”

	After some time all three are at the cave.

COP 2:
“Alright get in the cave and we’ll fallow you.”

GOOD:
“I don’t I want to go back in there. The bodies are in there you should go in first.”



COP 1:
“Are you refusing to obey a police officer? We need you to get in the cave first since you’re the witness.”

	Both cops and Good stand and look at each other hard. It’s a standoff


GOOD:
“I would never refuse to help an officer of the law. But seeing both of you aren’t real cops that doesn’t apply here.”

COP 2:
What was that? Didn’t your mother raise you right? You better do what you’re told or I’ll arrest you with impeding justice.”

	Good raises his index finger before speaking

GOOD:
One, when I told you about the crime you didn’t report it the police station. Two, those uniforms don’t fit right and I know all officers wear fitted uniforms. Thirdly and most importantly I know the chief of police would never hire slack jaws like you. I don’t know who you guys are but I suspect you are connected to the dead bodies in the cave, aren’t you?

Cops and Good have a standoff. Cop 1 pulls his gun and fires at Good. Then Good uses his stand. Good’s stand a human sized robot bug man with piston arms. Think Big O

GOOD:
Stolen goods!

Stolen Goods touches the bullet that was fired and touches some leaves hanging nearby. We don’t see Stolen Goods but see hand touching. The bullet reaches Good but nothing happens. Both cops are surprised and they fire until they empty their clips. Good is still standing.

COP 1:
“Dio Mio!”


COP 2:
“El Diablo.”

The cops stand there in fear. (Note they cannot see Good’s stand) Before the cops can do anything else Stolen Goods touches the cops shoes and a tree causing roots to grow out of shoes into the ground.

COP 1:
“My shoes, they grew roots like at tree. I can’t move at all.”

Cop looks down and pulls on shoes but they are stuck to the ground via roots. Close up on shoes.

COP 2:
“Mine too.”

While cops are struggling Stolen Goods begins to bunch the cop 1 repeatedly until he is bloodied and falls over. We don’t see this. Then cop 2 picks up his radio.

COP 2:
(speaks Spanish in radio)

Due to the shoe’s roots the cop can’t move. Good reaches him and pummels him to.


GOOD:
“The hell kind of mess I’m I in.”

Good searches both cops but finds nothing out of order. Then he notices that both cops have the same tattoo on their ankles.

GOOD:
“I think I’ve seen this symbol before, looks like an Aztec design. But what does this mean. Some sort of gang. But there no way Uncle Bill would let these two in the force. I need to warn them as quick as possible. There might be something really dangerous happening in town.”

As he says that Good hears police sirens in the distance. Good quickly runs down the mountain. By the road he sees another police car racing down the road. Good stands and thinks. He looks at the empty police car and gets in and drives away. Panel of Good in car.

GOOD:
“Rats! How did this all happen.”

Cops gain up on him and begin to fire at him. GOOD speeds up but they continue to fire.

GOOD:
“No matter how far I get they’ll still be able to shoot me. Hmm… I can’t outrun them so I guess I have to make them stop.”

One bullet almost punctures a tire but only leaves mark. Then Good slows down the car and lets the cops in closer. His Ki, Stolen Goods, touches his cloths then touches the cops tire. The tire instantly collapses and the cop car swerves off the road.

GOOD:
“I hope that’s the last of them.”


5. 	INT. 	Desert outside town.

Good continues to ride until he’s in the desert far away from town. Wide shot of Good driving in the desert. The tire that was hit blows out. Zoom in on tire.

GOOD:
“Ah shoot!”

Good leaves the car and looks around and sees nothing but desert. He turns his head and each turn we see more desert.

GOOD:
“Pickle warts!, I panicked and just kept driving off without thinking.”

Good slams the car a couple of time out of anger.

GOOD:
“I guess I have no choice.”

	Good walk off towards the distance. (caption: Some time later)
	Good is seen stumbling along while the desert heat takes its toll.


GOOD:
“So…(Gulps)…hot. Why did humans even settle here in the first place? It’s like we’re here only as a testament to mans arrogant defiance to nature.”

Good squints his eyes and sees something moving in the distance but it’s too hazy to see. Good looks up, the sun beats oppressively down on Good. He collapses. Fades to black.

WOMEN:
“Come on, you weren’t out there for too long, wake up.” (In black)

Good opens his eyes and see old Native American women standing over him. Show panel of him opening his eyes then to women. Camera goes out and we see Good is laying down in a room with the old women standing over him. Goods sits up in a panic.

GOOD:
“Who, what, where am I…are you…”

	The old women interrupts him. Puts her hand up.

WOMEN:
“Your safe…for now. Don’t get excited you just had a bit of dehydration.”

GOOD:
“Sorry, thank you for saving me. But might I ask who are you and where am I?

Women:
“My name is Healing rain. You are in my stand right now”

GOOD:
“Your what?”

HEALING RAIN:
“My stand, do you know what a stand is? You should since you have one yourself.”

	Good revels his stand


GOOD:
“You mean my ghost?”

HEALING RAIN:
“A ghost, not even close. A Ki is the physical reputation of your fighting spirit, a reflection of your will. Some people awaken with stands. They are called stand users. Each stand is completely unique in appearance and fighting power. Their strength reflects your strength. Their will reflects your will.

GOOD:
Are there more of these stand users? How do they work?

HEALING RAIN:
“Each stand is completely different but they all follow a vague set of rules, most of the time. First, only stands or items effected by stands can hurt another stand. If your stand becomes injured it might reverberate negative effects on its user. Also stands can’t be seen by normal people most of the time.

GOOD:
“Wait so earlier you said we were “inside” your stand?”

HEALING RAIN:
“Yes this is my stand, BABA YAGA!

	Show panel of a small house standing with chicken legs.

GOOD:
“I see, so what exactly does your stand do?”

HEALING RAIN:
“It has a very mysterious and awesome power. Many stand users would beg to have a stand like mine.

	Good has a intense expression. Waiting in anticipation to hear what her Ki does.

My stand……

	Even closer close up to Good’s face

Provides rent free living and free travel.”

	Healing rain laughs at her own joke while Good has a blank expression.


GOOD:
“I see, so how did you find me here, what are you doing out here in the middle of nowhere?”

	The kettle starts to whistle and Healing rain turn around and prepares some tea.

HEALING RAIN:
“I could ask you the same but it would be better if we ask…a higher power.”

	Good shows a confused look.


HEALING RAIN:
“Here drink this, this tea has medical properties.

	Healing rain hands a cup of tea to Good.

Make sure to drink as much of it as you can for it to work, quick, quick, drink.”

Good gulps down the tea and finishes it quickly. Healing Rain quickly grabs the tea and looks deeply into the cup.”

HEALING RAIN:
“Hmmm..yes I see, very interesting.

GOOD:
“What’s so interesting, why are you looking at my cup?”

HEALING RAIN:
I’m divining you past, present and future by reading your tea leaves. By looking at how the tea leaves left after you drank it the powers that be can show me insight to things unknown.”


GOOD:
“Yea sure.”


HEALING RAIN:
Do not doubt the tea leaves, I am a master of my craft.”

GOOD:
“So what do they say?”

	After some more examination Healing Rain explains

HEALING RAIN:
“It was no accident that we met. We were fated to meet here together, and we are fated to be together forever as….husband and wife.”

	Healing Rain gives a sly smile while Good freaks out.


GOOD:
“No no no no no no no, that has to be wrong, you’re crazy, you must have been reading the tea leaves upside down.”

	Healing Rains laughs

HEALING RAIN:
“sorry, sorry, sorry I couldn’t resist teasing you. I’ll be serious now.”

	Good sighs in relief and sits down with a serious expression.


HEALING RAIN:
“You have set yourself on a dangerous path. A path that will lead you far across these lands. Yes, I see you will make many enemies and few friends. Death will be a constant companion, always gabbing at your heels. I do not envy the path you will embark on but refusing to walk will result in the death of all that you love.”

	Good is stunned at this revelation. He sit’s there silently processing this.



HEALING RAIN:
“Shocked I know but this will pass, try not to focus too much on the future and be here in the now. You must head back to town and find the answers you seek.

	Healing Rain gives him a small parchment with a sketch of the Aztec symbol.

Do what you feel is right and above all else you must always believe in yourself and your actions least you falter. I hate to depart but you must leave at once, go now.”

	Good scratches his head a little.

GOOD:
“So are you gonna give me a ride back home, or…..”

	Healing rain interrupts him by pulling her hand up.



HEALING RAIN:
“Sorry, I got somewhere to be, my granddaughter had a baby and I told them I’ll go meet them and give my blessing and I don’t want to be scolded again for being late, this stand isn’t as fast as I’d like it to be, sooo…”

	Healing Rain gets up and grabs stuff from a chest

HEALING RAIN:
“Here you go…

Healing rain gives Good supplies that he would need all at once, Water, food, map and compass.

Just keep heading west to the mountains, I also gave you a map and compass just in case but I don’t think you’ll need it. Also wear this to its important.”

	Healing Rain puts a comically big sombrero with rainbow colors on.




GOOD:
“Uhh….thanks. Well my mother is waiting so I best be going. Thank you for everything, I don’t know what I would of done with you. If I see you again I’ll repay you some way. Good bye

Good leaves the house with his hat on and begins to walk. He looks back and sees the house walking in another direction. After a while Good is seen returning home. Hat still on.



MOM:
“Where have you been, I’ve been worried sick. I almost called the cops to go look for you. I told you to be back before….

	Mom notices silly hat on Goods head and begins to chuckle.

Where did you….but why. Did you walk all through town like that. You really are a strange one.”

	Good takes off the hot and approaches his mother and hugs her.


GOOD:
“I’m sorry I made you worried I got a little lost in the mountains. When I found my way I decided to buy this hat and walk all through town as punishment.”

MOM:
“You didn’t have to do that sweetie. I’m just happy you’re safe and sound. Just promise me you won’t get lot anymore okay.”

GOOD:
“Okay promise.”

MOM:
“If you break your promise I’ll make you wear your hat to school.”

	Both Mom and Good chuckle together. Fade to Good resting in bed.

GOOD:
“Man I’m so tired, I feel like all my energy has been drained out of me.”

	Good quickly falls asleep

6 INT. 		School building.

The bell rings and we see students leaving school. Cut to Good sitting in the library reading books on a table with a small stack of books next to him.
The book Good is holding clearly reads “Aztecs and more: with an Aztec design on the cover.

GOOD:
“I need to find out more what’s going on here. I can’t go to the police since I don’t know who to trust. The only clue I have is the matching symbol those cops had on their ankles.”

Good turn the page and reads a bit but a slight look of surprise hits him. He raises a brow

GOOD:
“This is it! The picture here matches the symbol exactly.”

A close up of the book. Shows one half of the page is pictured and the symbol is in the center. Good continues to read.

GOOD:
“hmmm..it seems this symbol represents some sort of Aztec sun god named Tunutaha. It says here he will be responsible for the end of the world. (quoting book) And on the final day Tunutaha will summon snakes made of stone that will rain a poisonous flam upon the world, hmm charming. I wonder if there are any books about this guy.

Good gets up and looks for books. He continues to walk. As he walk he gets a weird look on his face as he passes book shelves.

GOOD:
“That’s weird. Did they remodel this place; it’s a lot bigger than I remember.”

Good keeps walking but then slowly picks up the pace. He keeps turning and twisting down the book shelves. Now he’s jooging.


GOOD:
“Who’s the bag of weasel eggs that designed this place? I feel like I’m walking in circles.”

MYSTERY VOICE:
“Hahahaha.”

GOOD:
“Who said that? Show yourself.”

	Mysterious voice grows louder. That means bigger font size.


MYSTERY VOICE:
“Hahahahahah”

GOOD:
“This must be the work of an enemy stand. Who are you?”

MYSTERY VOICE:
“My name is nobody. No-bo-dy.”

GOOD:
“Show yourself.”

	Good becomes visibly angry.

NOBODY;
“Of all creatures that breathe and move upon the earth, nothing is bred that is weaker than man.”

As Good turns a corner he sees a spider paper monster. Monster strikes. Good uses his stand to make his sleeves a hard as his watch. It blocks the strike. Good is pushed back. Stolen Good rips up the paper monster. Good takes one of the legs.

GOOD:
“I could use this as a weapon.”

Good uses his stand to make the tip of the paper spider leg as hard as metal then makes the rest as flexible as shoe string. Good whips around his new weapon. He hears more monsters behind him and looks back and sees a mob of different monsters coming after him. Good runs away.

NOBODY:
“There will be killing till the score is paid.”


Good comes across another monster but quickly slashes it with his whip.

GOOD:
“Who are you working for? What’s going on in this town?”

NODOBY:
“Immortals are never alien to one another.”

Cut to a montage of Good running away from monsters, almost being killed by monsters and cutting the down. Good then is surrounded by a group of monsters and looks panicked. Then Good starts to hear a motorcycle. The crowd of monster gets run down by the motorcycle. The cycle reaches Good. Good panics and ducks. Motorcycle jumps over him and runs over the rest of the monsters. The motorcycle ride back to Good and stops. A young man around Good’s age is riding it. He is a greaser with a pompadour, white shirt, leather jacket, jeans and boots.

YOUNG MAN:
“Hey I’m Joe. Joe Fast.”

Joes name is in a big font in front of him.

GOOD:
“Boy I’m glad to see you. I almost ate a bowl of nails back there, without the milk.”

	Puts out hand to shake

JOE:
“Look here triangle man, I’m not here to slap pancakes together. I just wanna grab my waffles and get the hell outta here before the breakfast special ends.”

GOOD:
“Right, I’m good by the way..”

	Joe cuts him off


JOE:
“Yea I know who you are, you’re that guy who got that sick freak fired. I’d watch my creamy wheats if I was you. That Grabby no-nos might skin your toes when you’re not looking.”

GOOD:
“Thanks but we have bigger toast to butter right now. We need to work together and use our stands to get the outta here.”

JOE:
“You talking ‘bout your ghost power thing.”

GOOD:
“yea, there called stands they’re pretty much….

A noise of monsters rumbles in the back. Good and Joe see a new hoard of monster running toward them. Good hopes on his bike.

GOOD:
“I’ll explain as I go just keep riding.”

	Joe rides off deeper in to the library. Cut to Good talking to Joe on bike

GOOD:
“So that’s how stands work more or less.”

JOE:
“So all we gotta do is find this guy or his stands or whatever and we can get out of this pit of wrinkled pickles.”

Good:
“Yea, more or less.”

JOE:
“Got any ideas cause I’ve been ridding this crazy crocodile for a while and I haven’t seen anyone else but you.”


GOOD:
“I think the user is somewhere out of the maze but I suspect his stand might be hiding somewhere.”

JOE:
“If he’s somewhere he’s gotta be hiding somewhere real clever. But the thing is there’s nowhere to hide just never ending walls of books and hallways.”

GOOD:
“I think I got a pretty good idea where he might be hiding.”

JOE:
“What makes you so sure.”

GOOD:
“If you’re gonna hide a tree do it in a forest.”

	Joe rolls his eyes at Good.

NOBODY:
“Just as I have come from afar, creating pain for many men and women across the good green earth so let his name be the Son of Pain, a name he’ll earn in full.”

JOE:
“Hell, that mouth flapper keeps spouting nonsense like he’s some wise guy or something. I thought you said you knew where this knee sucker was.”

GOOD:
“I said I have an idea where he might be but I don’t think I got it yet, just let me think for a bit.”

	More monsters appears in front them

JOE:
“Hold on. You keep cracking that egg of yours and I’ll fry these suckers. Double post toasty.”

Joe reeves up his bike and does a wheelie. As he goes he shreds them with the razors that appear on his front tire. They go through the crowd of monsters.


GOOD:
“Ah…toasty. By Joe I think I got it.”

JOE:
“What do you got.”

GOOD:
Does your stand have a normal engine like a regular bike?”

JOE:
“Yea I checked it out it seems like a normal one except its stand abilities.”

GOOD:
“That’s good. I’m gonna need you to stop and reeve your engine as much as possible just generate as much heat as you can.”

JOE:
“For what?”

GOOD:
“Just trust me.”

Joe stops and reeves up his engine. Stolen Goods puts his hands on his engine and another on the books. After some intense revving the book catches on fire.

GOOD:
“Now we just gotta smoke him out. Then we’ll find him.”

JOE:
“Yea if we don’t turn into mom’s extra extra crispy Christmas chicken first.”

	Good hops back on the bike.

GOOD:
“Let’s ride.”

As they ride Good starts spreading his fire with his stand, burning down as many books as possible. After some time more and more of the hallways of books become engulf in flames. Until they see that only one hallway is untouched by the fire.

GOOD:
“There! Turn in that hallway.”

Good points to the unburnt hallway and Joe rides in. But is blocked off by a huge paper monster serpent. It’s on fire.  Joe tires to shred it but the snake breaths fire. Joe dodges it and rides off a bit. The monster doesn’t follow but guards.

JOE:
“I can’t get near baby biter. (Looks at Good) We need a “good” distraction.”

GOOD:
“Already on it.”

Good spits in his hand and Stolen Goods touches it and his cloths. His cloths become wet. Joe and Good ride close to the monster. Good Runs past him with his head covered. Monster breaths fire but Good is unburnt. Joe pops a wheelie and cuts his head off.

JOE:
“Woo, paper cuts do sting more.”

	Good and Joe high five

GOOD:
“Alright lets go in, we need to find the maze master.”

	Joe and Good ride in the hallway.


GOOD:
“Slowly, slowly I think he might be here somewhere.”

	Joe slows down while Good looks closely at the book.

GOOD:
“HA! Found you. Now your bacon bits are gonna feed the whole farm tonight.”

Good grabs a single book clearly titled, “The Odyssey”. He opens it and finds a face inside of it.

NOBODY:
“AHHHHH……Curses. How did you find me?

GOOD:
“It was simple really, you only have yourself to blame for your down fall.”

Good tosses the book on the ground with a smug look on his face. Camera is pointing up at good.

GOOD:
“At first I thought this maze was infinite and just never ended. That was until I notice repeating patterns and hallway numbers. So I knew we were going around in circles. That means you had to be somewhere reachable. The next problem was actually finding you. Luckily you gave us the first key to this two bit puzzle. All your quoting only comes from one book.” “The Odyssey”.

	Zoom in on page and as the title written on the top of the page of the book.

JOE:
“That’s some pretty impressive thinking, I just thought if I rode enough I’d just find the exit.”

GOOD:
“That only leaves one problem. Finding the book itself. That last part took me a bit to think of until Mr. Fast here showed up. I thought if I started a little fire it would spread until it would be reached the one hallway you didn’t want caught on fire.”

NOBODY:
“That’s impossible! There’s no way you could of figured out the power of my stand.”

GOOD:
“I guess you don’t have the same book smarts as I do. Hahaha. But unfortunately for you won’t have time to hit the books cause…we’re gonna….put the hit….oooonn youuuu.

Good looks at Joe for approval for his failed joke. Joe shakes his head in disappointment.

JOE:
“You really spilt the bag of wet sandwiches. My grandma could’ve baked a better insult and she doesn’t even have an oven.”

	GOOD puts his hands up.


GOOD:
“Whatever, just tare this bag of spoiled beans so we can get the hell outta here.”

Joe pulls the spikes out of his front tire and reeves up his bike. The tire rips apart the book with ease.

NOBODY:
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOO.”

After the book is gone the library goes back to normal. No fires, no mazes or monsters.

JOE:
“Man, what the hell was that guys problem.”

GOOD:
“Sorry you got involved in this. I think he was after me.”


JOE:
“Eh it happens,”

GOOD:
“SOOO are you in?”

JOE:
“In what?”



GOOD:
“In with me. I think there’s more of these guys. I think some bad people might be stirring up trouble in town and I don’t think we have enough biscuits to serve the whole table. I could use your help, as a fellow stand user.”

JOE:
“Keep your biscuits, I’m not letting anyone have a taste of my gravy sauce. Besides like you said these guys are after you so I’m not gonna help toss your salad until I start seeing my tomatoes in there.”

GOOD:
“I think your making a big mistake.”

	Joe shrugs with a frown and a turned downed brow and walks away.

7 	INT. HENRY WALKING OUT OF HIS HOUSE AND INTO STREETS

GOOD:
“The police, those stand users, the symbol, what does this all mean? I don’t know what going on but I feel like something bad is gonna happen if I don’t figure something out and do something.”

	Henry walk up to Good cutting his thoughts.

HENRY:
“Hey Good.”

GOOD:
“Oh Henry, hey. I haven’t seen you walk this way before.”


HENRY:
“I came here to thank you, I wanted to thank you sooner.”

GOOD:
“Thank me?”

HERNY:
“You know, for getting rid of Mr. Ratgutter. Everyone’s been talking about it, hell the whole town been taking about it. How did you forget something like that?”

GOOD:
“Oh sorry, I just been busy with stuff at home.”

HENRY:
“Well thank you again, you really saved my peanut basket back there. And not just mine to a lot of students were in trouble because of Mr. Ratgutter.”

GOOD:
“No problem, somebody had to do it. I was sure he would be fired after you caught him but he managed to escape somehow.”

HENRY:
“It was my fault, I should have done more than just reported him. All I had was my testament and no real evidence. I should did what you did and planed everything out with solid evidence and witnesses and stuff. I guess I didn’t do much in the end.”

GOOD:
“That’s not true; most would’ve said nothing in your situation. People might think your soft but I know you have a strong heart. You take the initiative where others are hesitant. Also if it weren’t for you I may have never caught Mr. Ratgutter in the first place. You should think more highly about yourself in the future.

HERNY:
“Yea, I guess you are right about that. I guess I didn’t think about it like that.

Good and Henry walk a bit before Henry hears a sound behind him. He looks back and see nothing but an ally way. Henry goes and checks it out. Good is deep in thought and doesn’t really notice. Henry enters the ally way and walk but finds nothing. He hears breathing behind him and sees Mr. Ratgutter. He is More disgusting than before. His body and cloths are covered in dirt and grease. Littered with stains, he looks more like an animal than a man.

HENRY:
“Mr. Ratgu…

	Henry is pulled to the ground.

HENRY:
“MMMMM.”

He tries to talk but something is preventing him. Mr. Ratgutter is very smug while he talks, holding a cruel smile. Close up to his face and Henrys while talking.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“Fancy meeting you here Mr. Reids. I was planning on having a little chat with you sooner. But you see,  a couple of days I met a man after I was fired. After talking with him he gave me this incredible power I now possess, the kind of power I’ve always dreamed of having. And all he asked in return was a little favor. To kill that bastard Good. Hahahaha. But before that I decided I’d kill you first.”

A dog appears behind Mr. Ratgutter and begins to bark. Mr. Ratgutter turns around and kicks the dog in the head really hard into the ground

MR. RATGUTTER:
“Shut it you mutt. No one will stop me getting my revenge.”

Mr. Ratgutter repeatedly kicks the dog in the head. While this happens Henry grabs into a trash bag and holds some gunk

MR. RATGUTTER:
“You know, I had a grand speech prepared but you see I’m in a hurry. My boss was very insistent that I kill specifically Good and I don’t want to disappoint him. Now then.”

Mr. Ratgutter pulls out a knife and walks towards Henry. As he gets close Henry throws gunk right in his eyes. Distracted and blinded Henry is let go and he runs away.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“That little piss monkey. Grraaaaaaa.”

Mr. Ratgutter is now very angry as he gets the gunk out of his eyes. He sees Henry turn the corner and follows. Cut to Henry breathing heavily.

HENRY:
“Pumpkin spice, what was that. I couldn’t move at all.

	Hears Mr. Ratgutter coming


MR. RATGUTTER:
“Ohhhh HEEEENNNRRRRYYYYY.”

HENRY:
“No time to think. Need to escape.

	Looks down way and see people walking by the end of alleyway.”

I can’t go out in public he might hurt someone like that dog. He’s clearly lost it. The police is to far I’ll never reach it before he catches me. There must be a way to escape him.

	Henry sees a sewer lid

Perfect
	Henry opens lid and begins to go down. He stops before he closes lid.

Wait what about Good. If he can’t find me he’ll kill Good. I need to warn him but…

	Henry quickly weighs his options. Remembers what good said. Flashback.

GOOD FLASHBACK:
“That’s not true; most would’ve said nothing in your situation. People might think your soft but I know you have a strong heart. You take the initiative where others are hesitant.”

HERNY:
“No, I’m the only one that knows. Right here, right now, Mr. Ratgutter needs to be stopped before he can harm anyone else. Everyone at school knew he was a scumbag. The teachers knew. The students knew yet no one did anything. Now it’s my chance to do something and this time I won’t fail.”

Henry goes down but leaves the lid open a little. Mr. Ratgutter turns in and looks around For Henry

MR. RATGUTTER:
“That no good little shit, where is he?

	Mr. Ratgutter looks around and snarls.

I swear to god I’ll tear that grease stain from limb to limb, slowly.

	Sees open lid and begins to open it and enter.

So you think you can runway from me? I’ll make sure you’ll be begging for death when I find you, Chicken Little.”

	Henry is running down the sewers.

HERNY:
“What was I thinking, I can’t fight him. I should of done literally anything else than lead him down into the sewers with me.”

Henry keeps running but we see he is leaving foot prints on the ground. Cut to Mr. Ratgutter. He looks down and sees Henry’s footprints.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“He might’ve been an honor student in the classroom but out here he’s a real idiot. Now you have nowhere to run. Coming down here was a big mistake, He should of done literally anything else than lead me down here.”

	Henry keeps running. He takes a turn but is met with a dead end.

HENRY:
“Butter rats, I need to find a way outta here.”

	Henry turns around and takes a step until he freezes when hearing his voice.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“Oh Henry, Come out where I can see you. I got a little pop quiz for ya.

	Henry is terrified and is frozen with fear.

You can’t hide from me forever.”

HENRY:
“This isn’t gonna end well. I’m gonna die down here. What did I do to deserve this? All I wanted to do was help. I should of put my head down and not stuck my nose in his business. Like everybody else. This is why everybody at school ignored him. They just wanted to get on with their lives with no trouble. No one wants this. The world is full of monsters and no heroes to stop them.  Now I’m gonna die here.

Henry crouches down and excepts his fate. He then remembers Good when he looked up at him at his confrontation with Mr. Ratgutter. Henry gets back up standing straight.

Henry:
“No there’s still hope left. The world needs heroes and if I have the aptitude and strength for it then I have no choice but to fight the evils of the world. If I see more monsters like Mr. Ratgutter then I refuse to put my head down like everyone else. I will continue to fight. I’ll fight till the end dam it.

	Henry feels power rising from within himself. He clenches his fist and grits this teeth.

What is this powerful feeling building inside of me?”

Henry’s stand is reveled. It’s a small green round robot head with a turtle shell. Before Henry can react Mr. Ratgutter walk in. Snarling as usual.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“auhh, where did a snot bubble like you get a stand. I didn’t know you had a power like that. Who gave it to you?

While he talks we see his stand. It’s a small evil monkey clown holding a jack-in-a-box. There are two robotic arms out of the box with white gloves.

HENRY:
“What is that, what is this, a stand. I don’t understand what’s going on anymore.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“Well I guess that doesn’t really matter now, your stand looks small and pathetic just like you. No matter what power you might have I will kill you.”

At this threat Henry’s stand (ROLLING THUNDER) blows a bubble and launches it towards Ratgutter. He is scared at the bubble not knowing what it can do. It reaches his face and pops. Nothing happens.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“Bwahahahahahah. And here I thought your stand might be secretly strong or something. What a joke. Your stand truly refelcs your fighting spirit, weak and worthless.”


HENRY:
“There’s no reason for you to do this. I never wanted to report you in the first place. If I had known you were bullied earlier I would have tried to help. There’s still time to think about this.



MR. RATGUTTER:
“Hahahahah. You actually believed my story about being bullied in high school. Hahahahaha. I’ll let you in on a secret. I was the bully during school.

	Flashback to Ratgutter bulling kids.

I love hurting people weaker than me. I loved doing it in high school. I loved it so much I become a teacher just so I could stay and continue to hurt weak brats like you. Hahahaha.

	Henry is shocked by this absolute evil. He runs away despite the dead end at the end.

MR. RATGUTTER:
Where ya think your goin?”

Ratgutter unleashes both hand out of the box and grabs him. Henry is dragged upside down in front of Ratgutter. He pulls out his knife.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“Since were down here I don’t have to shut your mouth. Now I can listen to you scream all I want and no one will hear you. And after I’m done with you I’ll make sure to say hello to your “GOOD” friend. Hahahaha.

Henry is scared but feels a bubble in his hand. It looks a little different than before. Almost spinning with power.



HENRY:
“What’s this? My stand blew another bubble while I was running and put it in my hand. It looks different than before. It’s almost like I can feel the power inside the bubble.

	Henry throws the bubble at Ratgutter face out of desperation.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“Another bubble. Ha, don’t make me laugh with this weak sissy power”

	The bubble hits his face and punches him down to the ground. Henry is unhanded.



HENRY:
“That power, how did it get so strong? When my stand blew the bubble and put it in my hand how did I make it stronger?


	Flashback to Henry being dragged this time close up on bubble in hand.

Of course, the movement of me being dragged must of gave it some sort of energy. The bubbles start out weak but with some movement I can give it energy.

	Ratgutter gets up. Now angrier than before.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“You think just cause you have a stand you can out do ol’ Ratgutter. I’ll show you the real power of my stand. Go Sweet pain.

The monkey turns the wheel and more hands pop out but now with knifes. They all attack Henry. He dodges them. All the while his stand is blowing bubbles and placing them in the RUNNING water. Zoom in on the water running over the bubbles and the bubbles spinning a little. After a bit Henry backs off  A little ways.

MR. RATGUTTER:
“Give it up kid, if you get on your knees and beg I might give ya a quick death.”

	Henry stands defiantly with a straight back and posing.

HENRY:
“If you think you can beat my stand then you’ve already lost.”

MR. RATGUTTER:
“What was that? You talk big for a dead man. Awwwww”

Ratgutter moves forward and steps on the one of the bubbles. It pops and blood is seen coming out of his shoe. Ratgutter is in pain.



MR. RATGUTTER:
“AWWWWWW….you little shit. You bastard. I’ll gut you like a fish and feed you to your mother.

Ratgutter moves again now his other footsteps on a bubble with the same results.

Uahhhh.”

He takes a knee from the pain but his knew also hits a bubble.

HENRY:
“I told you you’ve already lost this battle.”

Ratgutter just snarls in pure hatred and pain. He looks up and sees Henry right in front of him.

RATGUTTER:
“You bastard, there’s no way you can possible win. I always come out on top, always.

We see Henry’s hand holding two small bubbles while he twirls them. Go back to Ratgutter’s face

Please have mercy. You know I have a problem. I was born without a conscious. My mother never hugged me. No one raised me right. The doctors all said I was sick. Please some mercy please.

HENRY:
“Hmmmmm….”

RATGUTTER TO HIMSELF:
“While he’s distracted I’ll get him myself. He’ll never see it coming. (To himself)
(out loud) Awwwwwwwww.

Ratgutter lunges towards Henry with a knife but Henry dodges it. He puts the two bubbles in Ratgutters mouth. They pop and Ratgutter goes down.

HENRY:
“I’m sorry it had to come to this but you left me with no choice.”

	We see Henrys face now full of might and resolve.

8 		INT. 	GOOD WAKLING DOWN SAME STREET AFTER HENRY LEFT.

GOOD:
“Where did Henry go? Eh, whatever.”

Good continues to walk while we see a dog walk into the alley in the background. Good is seen walking through a park. Distant then gets closer. Camera pans over to Man hiding behind public bathroom. It is a concrete structure.

MAN:
“Dam that Ratgutter! He told me he had to take care of some business real quick. We were both supposed to wait for Good and jump him. (Looks at watch) Ah hell I’ll just do it myself I don’t even need him. One snap of my Azul Oyster and he’ll be dead. (Revels stand)

	His Ki is a giant blue oyster. As in blue oyster cult, get it?

Nobody can withstand the power of my Azul oyster.”

	Good is walking closer to the building.

Man:
“So close, just about ten more feet and he’ll fish food.” (Licks lips)

	Good takes a step but he is interrupted by a women.

WOMEN:
“Have you seen my dog? I was walking him but he seems to have ran off.”

GOOD:
“Nope sorry can’t say I have.”

	Women thanks him and walk away.

MAN:
“tsch, You better thank that women. She just gave few a few extra seconds of life.”

	Good takes another step but is stopped by a old man

OLD MAN:
“Hey sonny, have you seen my daughter around here. You see her dog ran off and she went looking for him. But then I got worried and started looking or her.

GOOD:
“She went that way.” (Points)

OLD MAN:
“Oh thanks you.

	Old man walks off. Camera now back to Man.

MAN:
“(SIGHS angrily) Just get over already. Just a couple more feet you can do it.

Good almost get to him but then a dog with a stick appears. Good pets the dog and takes the stick.

GOOD:
“They both went that way. (Points with stick)

The dog barks and gives a nod and walks away. Good starts playing with the stick like a sword.

MAN:
“AWWWW, How hard is it to walk a few feet. I can’t take the suspense anymore. Now he’s just standing there playing with that stick like his life depended on it.

	Mans face is visibly angered and wide eyed.  Good looks at his watch.

GOOD:
“Oops. I better go before I’m late for school.”

	Good begins to walk

MAN:
“Yes, doomed by the bell. Your punctuality will be your undoing. Now’s my chance, finally.

View angle of left. Good walking with stick pointing right. As Good walk by the corner Azul oyster snaps at him. But the stick prevents Azul Oyster from reaching him. The stick gets crushed with the many rows of long fangs.



MAN:
“You overused ashtray! After all that waiting you put me through you went and ruined everything with your dumb luck.”

GOOD:
“Luck had nothing to do with it. I smelled your dirty laundry a mile away. I went slow on purpose just to boil your socks then I blocked your attack to. I had you on the spot before you even attacked.

MAN:
“Impossible! There’s no way you could of saw me. I made extra sure you wouldn’t see me.”


GOOD:
“You should check out a dictionary sometime, cause I don’t think you know what the word “extra” means.”

	Puts up his index finger and so on as he explains.

GOOD:
“First, you left tracks on your way here.”

	Man looks back and sees light but visible trails leading to his spot

MAN:
“Those tracks could have been anyone’s. No sane man would assume it would have been a killer’s track.”

GOOD:
“True but these were no ordinary tracks. You see if someone were to walk that way they wouldn’t go around the restroom they would walk straight to the doors. No one would of purposefully taken a longer route for no reason.

	Show diagram marking the two paths. Showing he is correct

MAN:
“Even if the tracks don’t match up someone could have been just been walking along without the intent of using the restroom.”

GOOD:
“Those tracks could of belonged to anyone walking along but in conclusion with your other mistakes I found out your scheme.

	Puts up second finger

GOOD:
“Second, you should buy a compass along with your dictionary. Everybody knows the sun rises in the east and look at your position with accordance to the sun.

	Man looks at the sun and around him

MAN:
“What does the sun have to do with finding me out? I call bullshit, you just got lucky.”

GOOD:
“It’s true that warriors of the past would attack with the sun at their backs as to blind the enemy. But in this case it opened my eyes wide open. Notice the material your watch is made out of.

	Man looks at his watch with a uhhh sound.

The light reflected off the metal of your watch making a small but noticeable ray of light shining off of you.

Man looks down and seen reflection of light on the ground. Surprised sounds. Good points up his last finger.

GOOD:
“And thirdly but most importantly you made one mistake that confirmed your presence without a doubt.

MAN:
“What is it!”

GOOD:
“I wasn’t joking about smelling your dirty laundry before. You should really get a wash every once in a while.”

	Man sniffs his cloths.

MAN:
“You’re gonna wish you died back there with a quick death. Now I’m gonna tear ya from limb from limb.”

GOOD:
(To himself) “Now he’s mad as a marble. I made up that last bit as a joke. (snickers)
(To Man) Now that you understand the gap between our abilities you should go home before I have to get serious.”

MAN:
“Baw, you think you know what I’m capable of? You haven’t witness the true power of Azul Oyster.”

	Man gets into fighting stance with Azul Oyster next to him

GOOD:
“So be it, but don’t say I didn’t warn you.”

Good gets into fighting stance with Stolen Goods. Panel of semi close up of both men facing each other. With Kis next to them.

Both stands go at once. Golden Goods changes his hands to concrete whileAzul Oyster bites him. He misses and Golden Goods  shuts him mouth with a punch be for he can snap at him again.

GOOD:
“(to himself)I’ll reduce him to a pulp in no time.”

Stolen Goods keeps hitting him repeatedly but nothing happens. Golden goods goes even faster and pummels Azul Oyster into the ground. After the dirt smoke clears a streak of shine goes across Azul Oysters shell.

 MAN:
“HAhaha. Now you see the power of my stand. Azul Oyster is virtually indestructible. Nothing can crack it’s shell. Now it’s my turn.

Azul Oyster snaps at Stolen Goods but keeps going back and dodges.  Good backs up to a tree.

GOOD:
“If I can’t break him then I’ll just make him break himself.”

Good quickly backs up to a tree. Stolen Goods touches the soft ground and the tree. A bit of the tree becomes soft and deforms. The tree collapses on itself and falls over.  The tree falls over. It smashes right into Azul Oyster but the tree snaps in half as it hits it.

MAN:
“I told you already my Ki in unbreakable. You might as well give up now before you embarrass yourself even more. Truly someone of your intelligence would….

	Before he could finish Good runs away leaving Man behind.



GOOD:
“He thinks his stand is too strong for Stolen Goods. But he forgot I saw his one weakness. when first attack me I notice a small soft bit inside the shell that must be his weak point. When I attacked him a second time he didn’t fight back. He feared if he opened his mouth I might hit him. That also explains why he opted for a sneak attack instead of confronting me at first. I need to get inside that mouth. But I can’t risk getting my arm ripped to shreds.
 (to himself)



MAN:
“AWWWW (Begins to run)…All that time waiting, now I have to run after this turtle tickler and Ratgutter still isn’t here. I hope at least my other half is faring better than I am.
(To himself)

Quick cut to Joe walking inside a pharmacy. He grabs a cola drink and walks to the counter to pay.

MAN 2:
“Is that a…cola you buying there?”

	We see Man 2 make a weird and hazy smile. Up close.

JOE:
“What’s it to ya?”

MAN2:
“Oh nothing really I was just wondering if you’ve ever heard of  Wunderbar RootBeer. The W is pronounced like a V.

JOE:
“Not interested pal.”

MAN2:
“You should really reconsider it’s quit the drink. (Presents drink in hand) It’s all brewed in Germany. It hasn’t hit global markets for a while but in a year it became a big hit in Brazil. When I first drank it I became hooked. Now I can’t stop drinking it.

	Man2 opens bottle and takes a sip

Awww refreashing.”

JOE:
“Are you from a marketing team or something? Stop wasting time with that noise. Everybody here guzzles the cola.”

	Man2 makes a slight frown.

MAN2:
“No matter where I go I hear the same story. Even though Wunderbar has gotten popular in South America Cola is still the preferred drink. Despite Cola being the inferior drink people can’t seem to make the switch. My theory is that people only drink cola and not Wunderbar is because Cola came first and became a habit. It’s a shame really. People would benefit more if they tried new things and not stick to the old just because they are use to it. Don’t you agree?

	Man2 makes a creepy smile.

JOE:
“Buzz off egg head before I put you in a frying pan, sunny side up.

	Joe turns and begins to walk off. Man2 steps in front of him.

MAN2:
“Oi, you don’t think you can walk away from me after talking to me like that?”

JOE:
“You better step off of me or you’ll be sipping root beer through a straw for a week.”

MAN2:
“Oh a threat now, normally I’d be scared, you see I’m easily frightened. But you look like someone who can’t put their words to actions.”

Man2 puts his arms on his hips and smugly looks down on Joe. Upwards angle with him with Joe angrily looking up at him.

JOE:
“I’ll show you some action.”

	Joe punches Man2 but pulls back in pain. Holding his fist.

JOE:
“That didn’t feel right. That almost felt like I was hitting a wall of…”

MAN2:
“Stone?”

	Man2 shows stand. It is a red crustacean man with a diver helmet.

JOE:
“GASP. You’re a stand user too.”

MAN2:
“My how observant. I was afraid I was going to have to explain myself.”

	Joe gives a triumphant smirk.

MAN2:
“Ohh, still have putting up your dukes I see. My how I envy the youth.”

	Joe and Man2 face off each other. Joe brings out his stand and strikes him.


JOE:
“Rat Outta Hell!”

	ROH attack Man2. The spike tires saw at him to no effect. Joe’s stand stands down.

MAN2:
“How boring. And here I was expecting a little excitement this morning. I guess I could count this a warm up though.

Joe becomes visibly angry and picks up his bike and smacks him with it. Man2 falls over but doesn’t move a muscle. Man2 speaks while on the ground.

Man2:
“Do you now see or do I have to explain it to you. My stand, Stone Lobster, is invincible. No one has been able to hurt me.

	Very quickly stone lobster hits Joe. As he reels in from the pain Man2 gets up.

JOE:
“Gawww, I’l make sure you’ll pay for that. Plus tip.

MAN2:
“Still haven’t given up? How amusing, looks like I need to put you down for good.”

Man2 gives Joe another hit but it is blocked by his stand. Man2 keeps hitting but the bikes large size keeps getting in the way.

JOE:
“You’re not the only one with a hard head. I’ve crashed my stand into brick walls and it didn’t get a single dent.”

Joe tries to hit him again but with the same results. Man2 almost hits him. After a few trades Man2 gets in a single hit on him.

Man2:
“Your stand might be hard but you yourself are still vulnerable to attacks. I just need a few lucky hits and you’ll be down for good.”

	Joe holds his stomach in pain.

JOE: (To himself)
“That last hit was pretty bad. I don’t know if I can take another one. There has to be a weak point I just need to find it. If only my stand was a little more…

	Joe quickly gets on his bike and runs off.

I need to head for school. If there’s one person who can help it’s Good. He could steam his buttered clams no problem.

	Joe rides off down the street.

Man2:
“ugh. Mark me fool. The thrill of martial combat consumed me. I should of finished him off before he ran away. But enough of that. Now for the hunt.

Man2 gets into running position and runs at full speed towards Joe. Cut back to Good running away from Man. Good crosses the street and in front a ally way. He turns around and faces Man.

MAN:
“Huff Huff. You should of chosen a different path. That ally is a dead end with a death sentence. Turning left or right would of slowed you down and get caught. Now I have you exactly where I want you.”

GOOD:
“You think you have me cornered. Look around, I have you exactly where I want you to be.

	Man looks around both ways.
MAN:
“Don’t try to fool me. Admit your defeat like a man and stand still so I can give you a quick death.

GOOD:
“It seems you still haven’t figured it out yet. Let me give you a lesson before school starts. I could of ran anywhere I wanted. But of all places I choose here.

	Vroom vroom sounds appear in the corner.

MAN:
“Stop bluffin. There’s no way you could of known we would end up here. You didn’t even know I was gonna attack you at the park.”


GOOD:
“Humph. If you still think I came here without a plan in mind you must be a bigger fool than I thought.

	Vrom Vrom sounds get bigger and closer.

MAN:
“Well here I am. So tell me this “master” plan of yours.

GOOD:
“Oh your about find out about now.”

Vroom sounds get huge. Joe rides in and attacks Man. Joe is blocked by Azul Oyster. Man is knocked back into a street pole. Azul Oyster pushes Rat Outta Hell off of him.

MAN:
“Awwww…. Impossible. There’s no way you could of known he would your friend would be here. This whole day has been set up from the start.

GOOD:
“One simply plays the cards your dealt with, maybe you should learn to play poker or give up before you lose it all.”

A yellow cab is seen brakinghard in front of everyone as it swerves. Man2 walks out of the driver’s side. He fixes his tie a little.

MAN2:
“Oh dear little brother. I see you’re still having trouble with your target, sham. But don’t worry big brother is here to help.

MAN:
“Your one to talk, I see you haven’t finished things on your end either. While you’ve been day driving I’ve been holding these two off on my own this whole time.

MAN2:
“I doubt that. But no matter now that were both here we can quickly finish.

MAN:
“Yes, no one has been able to withstand the power of the Diablo brothers.

	Bothe brothers take a fighting stance. Good quickly runs into the allyway.

GOOD:
“JOE! FOLLOW! QUICK!

	Joe looks confused but follows anyways.

MAN2:
“You take the greaser and I’ll handle the boy.

MAN:
“Right.”

MAN uses Azul Oyster to jump on fire steps and jumps down at end of ally in front of Joe. Man2 walk in and stands in front of GOOD. Wide shot of Good and Joe stuck between The Brothers in a dead end Ally way.

GOOD:
“You seem pretty confident in your skills. We’re clearly outmatched here.”

JOE: (Interrupts)
“That’s one hell of a motivational speech you got there.”

	Good ignores Joe.

GOOD:
“Before we go I’d like to know who you’re working for and why he wants us dead.”

	Both brothers smirk at the same time.

MAN2:
“We would be happy to tell you, on one condition of course.”

MAN:
“On the condition you introduce us to your mother first.”

Both brothers laugh. They stop and get serious. Good’s face is now angry. It’s a standoff. Joe attacks first with his bike. It hits the top of Azul Oyster but to no effect.

JOE:
“Dam, it’s the same as stone lobster. Good, any kinks in this tin bucket?

GOOD:
“I think the inside has a weak point. Strike when he opens his mouth.

JOE:
“Ha sounds easy I don’t know why you had such a har…

Azul Oyster opens its mouth showing off its rows of deadly fangs. Joe looks concerned. Back to Good. He grabs a stick and the brick walls to make stick hard like brick. Stolen good tosses stick like spear but it breaks.

GOOD:
“hmm..Didn’t even try to dodge it.”

MAN2:
“Impressive isn’t it? My Stone Lobster can make me invincible. A bullet couldn’t even hurt me.”

GOOD:
“Yea it’s impressive alright. Why don’t you come over and show me how impressive your stand  can be? I might even go easy on you if it looks like your having trouble.”

	MAN2 shakes his finger.

MAN2:
“tch tch tch. You think you bait me with such petty insults. I can wait all day if I have to, can you?

	Good stands there and weighs his options.



GOOD:(To himself)
“He doesn’t want to get near me so his attack power must me weak. His defense is strong but there must be a weakness to it. If he was invincible he would of attack me already. Hmm…Of course!”
(to man2)
Alright you better be ready for my next attack cause I’m putting extra hot sauce on this lobster.”

MAN2:
“Your appetizer was a bust I doubt you can impress me with the main course.”

Good gets low to the ground and takes a stick and makes it metel Stolen Good’s quickly kicks him to the back of the head. Man2 falls over still unmoving. Good takes another stick and tries to stab him while he falls. It does not work. Good runs past him quickly. Man2 lays on the ground while speaking. He looks towards Good.

MAN2:
“Nice try making me move while I fall. I’m surprised you figured out my stand so quick.”

GOOD:
“So my suspicions were correct. You stone Lobster only works when you completely still.”

MAN2:
“That’s correct, you must be surprised I didn’t move a muscle even when I was falling and be stabbed at the same time. If I know a attack is coming I don’t flinch. I’ve develop the opposite reflexes of a normal person. Instead of panicking I stay completely still. No matter what trick you pull all I have to do is stay completely still until I can strike.

GOOD:
“You can’t be serious. That kind of power is too good, it’s almost cheating.”

MAN2:
“If this kind of power scares you then you’re lucky I will spare you the terror of witnessing true power.”

GOOD:
“So there’s more of you out there, with even more powerful stands? Why are you all here, why now?”

MAN2:
“I’d like to chat but I have an appointment to keep and I’d hate to keep my master waiting.”

Man2 gets up but slips and stumbles over. When he hits the ground we see only his face which is in pain. We zoom out and we see a pencil through his chest. Man2 tries to pull out the pencil but Good stops him.

GOOD:
“I made sure I placed that pencil were the wound won’t be fatal, now talk.”


MAN2:
“AWWWWWW……How?

	Good gets a smug look on his face and puts up his fingers as he counts.


GOOD:
“One, I did more than figure out your stand’s power but I also figured that you wouldn’t move unless you were surprised. Two, Too surprise you I tricked you into thinking that I only knew about your stand power but failed to realize your true weakness. Three, when I knelt down I wasn’t just preparing to jump at you I made preparations for my real attack. I used Stolen Goods to make the ground in front of you slippery like a banana.

	Flash back to Stolen Goods touching a banana and the ground.

Then I placed a pencil on the ground in just the right size so it would hit you exactly where I wanted to.

	Flash back to Good placing a pencil.

The battle was already over before you made your first move.”

MAN2:
“I..cough…would of never guessed I’d be outclassed by a kid. You’re not half bad. But….cough….you’ll never win against out master. We will keep coming until your all dead. Cough.”

GOOD:
“I’d like to hear more about this master of yours. If you talk I could get an ambulance for you.”

MAN2:
“You don’t understand I’m already dead, our master does not tolerate frailer. Also…cough…even though I believe you’ll never beat out master I’d never betray him. There’s only one option for me now. Cough

	Stone Lobster grabs Man2’s head.

GOOD:
“NO! Stop!”

Stolen Goods tries to grab Stone Lobsters hands but it’s too late. Stone Lobster snaps his neck. Man2 is dead.

GOOD:
“Dam.”
Good is holding the lifeless body of Man2. Close up to his face as he realizes the weight of the situation. Here hears a noise and he quickly looks up at Joe fighting. Azul Oyster has Rat Outta Hell in its mouth but as it chomps no damage is done.

MAN:
“WHY WON”T YOU CRUSSSHHH.”

	Azul oyster chomps down even harder but to no avail.

JOE:
“Rat Outta Hell, NOW.”

The tires of Joe’s Stand begin to turn. The wheels tear the inside of Azul Oyster and Man becomes bloody and falls over. As wheels turn Good tries to stop Joe but is too late.

GOOD:
“No, we needed him alive.”

	GOOD goes to bloody Man but he is dead.

JOE:
“There was nothing I could of done. It was a fight to the death.”

GOOD:
“He’s dead now. We could have investigated what he knew. Now we’re back to square one. “

JOE:
“Like I said I didn’t have much of a choice. It’s pretty hard to focus when someone is trying to crush you. I couldn’t subdue him alone.”

GOOD:
“WE could have subdued him. I had a plane man.”

JOE:
“Piss your plan. No one tells me what to do.”

	Joe points at Good.

GOOD:
“Whatever. What’s done is done. We need to move fast. Someone might have heard us and contacted the police.”

JOE:
“If there’s one thing you can trust me on I know a thing or two about avoid the boys in blue.”

	Joe quickly walks out as Good fallows while he sighs at Joe’s comment.
Before Good leaves he takes one last look at the dead men. Turns back and walks out the ally.
Time skip to some other time.
Joe walks into the same gas station and grabs a cola but stops and sees Wunderbar root beer. Puts the coke back and purchases the root beer. Steps out of the store, opens it and takes a drink.

JOE:
“Hm…This is pretty good.”

	Scene end fade to black.

9		INT. 	All three boys waking up in bed.

All three boys start their day. Interchange between all three as they brush their teeth, comb hair, put cloths on. End with all leaving out door.
Good is walking down the park. Joe is walking out of station. Henry is walking by road. They all meet each other by the school. All face each other is silence looking at each other.

GOOD:
“Hey Henry

JOE:
“Mornin Good.”

HENRY:
“Buenos días.”

	All stand in front of each other until Joe breaks the silence.

JOE:
“Oh I got it. We can get Henry to help us. He knows a lot of stuff.”

GOOD:
“Don’t get Henry involved in this.”

HENRY:
“Involved in what?”

GOOD:
“It’s nothing, we just got some bad boys trying to ride us down.”

Henry:
“Actually I think I already know.”

GOOD and JOE:
“What?”

	Henry sighs and inhales deeply

HENRY:
“Yesterday Mr.Ratgutter attack me with a strange power. He told me someone hired him or something to kill you.”

GOOD:
“A strange power?

	Good and Joe look at each other.

HENRY:
“Yea he called it a “stand”. I don’t expect you to believe me but he summoned some weird demon and attacked me with it. I know it sounds crazy but I know what I saw. And even during the fight I gained a stand too but nobody has been able to see it. I was hoping you would know something about it since Mr. Ratgutter was after you.

	Good and Joe both nod at each other and revel their stands

GOOD:
“We’re stand users to.”

	Both stands are reveled. Joe and Good make poses

JOE:
“Alright now shows us yours.”

HENRY:
“Are you sure people can’t see it. I tried showing it but my parents both couldn’t see it but I’m still not sure.”

GOOD:
“Don’t worry non stand users can’t see stands.”

JOE:
“Except for mine. I can choose whether or not people can see it. It’ll look silly riding a invisible motorcycle.”

HENRY:
“Well then.”

Henry pulls out his stand. All three boys stand there with their stands out. Now our heroes are all together and everything is set.

GOOD:
“Since your already involved there’s no point in not telling you. We think there’s some badguys in town trying to stir up some trouble. We don’t know who they are or what their planning but I think the town might be in big trouble soon.”

JOE:
“They already sent some assassins after us. These guys aren’t messing around.”

GOOD:
“Some guys disguised as cops tried to kill me too.”

	Henry face becomes wrote with fear

HERNY:
“Wow! This is some messed up stuff. The whole town could be in trouble.”

GOOD:
“I know right. We need to find these guys but we don’t have much to go on. Only this.”

Good pulls out a piece of paper with the symbol on it. He hold it up and shows it to Henry.

HERNY:
“I’ve seen this before. It was on the news.”

GOOD:
“Seriously! What is it? What does it mean?”

HENRY:
“I saw it on the news a while ago. It’s the symbol of a communist terrorist group in South America.”

JOE:
“Communist!”

HENRY:
“Yea, they got pretty big in the past couple years. They blow up buildings. Kidnap politicians. Anything to spread their influence.”

GOOD:
“If that’s the case.

	Good closes his fists and gets serious.