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- Saya: Chapter 1, (2 deployed)
- Sora: 1, 2 Deployed
- Paa: Health issues, but seems interested.
- Genghis: Read when finished
- Nymph: None
- Salad: 1, 2, 3 Deployed
- Mamba: ?
- Kitterdoodles: 1, 2 Deployed
- Amasi: Read 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6.
- Spinda: ?
- Elisyma: 1, 2, 3, 4 Deployed
- Sanguine: 1, 2, 3 Deployed
- Melodrama: Give her them at some point.
- Avelyn: N/A
- Scim: 1
- Umi: Finish it first.
- Rini: 1
- Anari: ?
- Shala: 1
- Kazmius: Finish it first.
- IN-Depth Critiques
- Amasi: A small suggestion though: Terry was not really mentioned in any capacity in this version, and simply used as a "This is what Greyweald does to a person."
- Maybe a few lines, a description, or something to make the reader think he might be important to the plot only to be brutally executed could be good?
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