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- Hello their!
- This is my first plot review ever, so this is your lucky day!
- To start off your terrain/organics is very good, with the extra detail of the buttons on the cactus and the handmade trees. Your landscape is also good, but their are areas that the ground is flat at some parts of the area, but it looks great anyway.
- Next, I see you went with the desert temple theme, and you recreated that very nicely. Instead of Recreating it though, you can make it your own and add your own detail into the build instead of a smaller version of the actual in game build. You can maybe try adding more fences or slabs/stairs so make it have more layers. Otherwise, it looks good.
- Great job and you will do great as a novice!
- -Tayter_Kat
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