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- Hello _AwesomeGalaxy_!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Let's start off with your structure.
- Your structure is lacking depth, detail, and color. Try to use stairs and slabs for designing your walls for it will add detail and color to your build. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial for extra help.
- Your trees look like they were bonemealed which is not accepted when ranking. Remove them and make custom trees. Remember to add branches and roots because they add realism.
- Your terrain looks really plain and lacks color/detail. Try adding other blocks for variation such as green clay, cobblestone, gravel, etc. Also you should smooth your hills some more because it looks unnatural. The birch wood in the moat doesnt really go well with it.
- Overall, your plot still needs a lot of work before I can rank you. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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