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- Hey there! :3
- Firstly, terrain. I like the layers you have in the terrain; there's definitely enough of them. I also like the palette choice, however I wouldn't make one of the blocks the same as you have used in the structure. It merges a bit too much, and doesn't distinguish well. Change the nether brick in the terrain to another block! :)
- Secondly, organics. I like the idea on this plot and I like the dead trees you have, to suit the style. However, I think you have them a bit too bunched together. There's a lot of open space at the 'bottom' of the plot, where you could have a few, instead of having them all on the top layer. This would also fill the space down there. Some nether based organics would be nice too! I would suggest a dragon, but that's done a lot. But I think it would be fitting on this plot.
- Lastly, structure. The castle you have is alright, and the detailing is nice, but it's hard to notice. I think it's the brown clay; maybe try red clay instead? Just a tip, it might look awful! :P
- Also, the tower detailing is way too 'checkerboarded', which is an incredibly simple way to detail, and not creative. Instead, I would use netherbrick stairs/slabs on the side of the tower, as well as more coloured blocks (red clay again).
- You could also add some smaller structures on the bottom of the plot. I'm not sure if the mech really works with this style. It's a bit too futuristic for it.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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