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- UNDER THE CATEGORY OF 'OTHERS'
- BOOK 1: TAKE ME TO THE SKY | BTS AU
- AUTHOR: YahSesanginGirl
- P: 14
- LGS: 10
- CD: 8
- RI: 9
- BA: 4
- COMMENT: The story is extremely well-written and draws the reader in and makes them feel like they're with Ava and Shae. The characters here are very realistic, you've given them all flaws which makes them more relatable and understandable.
- BOOK 2: ETHEREAL ━ jjk • pjm • kth
- AUTHOR: IRRELEVANTAE
- P: 13
- LGS: 9
- CD: 6
- RI: 8
- BA: 4
- COMMENT: Quite an interesting style of writing is displayed here, gives the readers a nice chance to have their own interpretation instead of being dictated by the author's intended interpretation.
- BOOK 3: Classmates || BTS KTH & KNJ ✔
- AUTHOR: AuthorVc
- P: 6
- LGS: 4
- CD: 5
- RI: 4
- BA: 4
- COMMENT: This story could use less POV changes, please keep to a consistent way of referring different characters. Could be improved with grammar check and a more interesting plot development.
- BOOK 4: The Square ( on hold for a bit )
- AUTHOR: AnjellaBangtanTrash
- P: 9
- LGS: 7
- CD: 5
- RI: 5
- BA: 4
- COMMENT: The plot was a bit hard to follow with all the POV changes. Character development was not very clear and everyone seemed to be flawless except for the occasional jealousy. Please refrain from using a mix of 2 languages.
- BOOK 5: For You ||BTS||
- AUTHOR: lenoxARMY16
- P: 11
- LGS: 9
- CD: 8
- RI: 7
- BA: 4
- COMMENT: Story has a nice twist to it and is pleasantly descriptive. The character's emotions are well-written but because it is a reader name insert, does not describe what everyone reading it may feel.
- BOOK 6: Treat You Better
- AUTHOR: Sadist_King
- P: 10
- LGS: 8
- CD: 7
- RI: 6
- BA: 4
- COMMENT: This story seems very rushed throughout and the reader may have a hard taking in information. The character's emotions here only seemed to be either sad, annoyed or happy and the reader feels like they're only a spectator in the story rather than going along the journey with the characters.
- BOOK 7: The Girl With The Guitar || BTS
- AUTHOR: downmixx
- P: 12
- LGS: 9
- CD: 8
- RI: 8
- BA: 4
- COMMENT: The story here is developing nicely except it starts to get cliche when BTS are popular at school and have jealous fan girls. JiHee does not change very much throughout the first few chapters but otherwise the plot twist was well-handled.
- BOOK 8: More Than I Deserve
- AUTHOR: Sugasluv
- P: 11
- LGS: 9
- CD: 8
- RI: 8
- BA: 4
- COMMENT: Jennie, Hoseok and Yoongi seem to be very complicated characters in terms of love but it was put in the story nicely, however it can confuse the reader and seems a bit rushed with all the time skips.
- BOOK 9: Choose: Me or Him? | jjk ✔️
- AUTHOR: sighlevi
- P: 11
- LGS: 9
- CD: 8
- RI: 8
- BA: 4
- COMMENT: Nicely written story with a refreshing plot twist breaking the cliche of the main character always waking up from a coma. However it wasn't very well organised, for example Nari's godparent's sudden change in attitude would have confused many readers.
- -MILKTEASENPAI
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