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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far, but theres some things i think you should work on before ranking up!
- Firstly ill talk about your terrain. As of right now (yes i know its desert theme) your terrain is a bit too flat. Try to experiment with different levels of terrain to make your plot more dynamic.
- Your structure is pretty nice, and it has decent amount of detail for it's style. But right now its a bit too small. Maybe add more structures, or add on to the one you currently have.
- Try to make some custom cacti to make your plot feel a little less vanilla and try to keep the trees to a place that generally has water. No water no growth irl so keep that in mind :)
- Good plot so far and i hope this helps!
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