Tayter_Kat

initiate review

Jun 22nd, 2015
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  1. Hello EricaTheBosss, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Buildings:
  4. these are fine, great job on these! I would separate them instead of putting them in the position they are now(scatter them randomly) but that is just a personaly choice... Great!
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  6. Terrain/Organics:
  7. The terrain is a bit flat, try making the ground more uneven to make it more real. More trees wouldn't hurt either:)
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  9. Good Luck <3
  10. -Tayter_Kat
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