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[IMPLEMENTED] Helia Fixes

Dec 10th, 2018
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  1. Fighting Helia.
  2. >One of her scaled arms reaches around your waist, and the other toward your head, but you roll away from her grip and push her bodily away.
  3. I'm fairly sure "bodily" should be "body".
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  6. Helia MinosRBad scene.
  7. >Well, it’s a minotaur, all right. But if there’s any attacking going on, it’s the poor beastman getting victimized. You see your salamander, her sword and bikini tossed haphazardly aside,
  8. Change to "You see your salamander friend," as right after this scene she stops fucking around, but here she's still mostly an acquaintance.
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  11. >I never bothered counting, but it’s a lot. How could you possibly be helping me?”
  12. Remove the bolded "but it's a lot" part, it's just Savin exaggerating with his love for women taking it from everyone wankery, it also feels slightly hammed in.
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  15. >“What do you mean 'addictive?' How the hell is bullspunk addictive; the fuck kinda sense does that make?”, just like how cowgirls have addictive breastmilk
  16. >She lightly scowls while she absorbs the information. You wonder how she’s going to deal with this.
  17. Sentence just cuts off there. Amend it to:
  18. ""What do you mean 'addictive?' How the hell is bullspunk addictive; the fuck kinda sense does that make?" You start explaining plainly that it's just like how cowgirls have addictive breast milk, she lightly scowls while she absorbs the information.
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  20. You wonder how she's going to deal with this."
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  23. Next screen there seems to be an empty line at the top of the text.
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  26. [Its Okay tooltip] fix "Its" to be "It's"
  27. "You figure that's more trouble than it's worth, just let her do her 'thing' with the minotaurs and other creatures."
  28. [Satisfy Her]
  29. "She wont need anything else again — addictive or not — as long as she's with you."
  30. Since this mod changes her sleeping with other characters, this tooltip should reflect that.
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  33. IF PICKED MinosRBad PREVIOUSLY
  34. Helia's Love Confession.
  35. >“I don’t just like you, [name] - I mean, I do. Like you, I mean. But it’s... it’s more than that, you know? Sure, I’ve said the word, but I say 'love' to a lot of people, a lot of things. I love your ordinary-looking pecker and everything else about you. But... but that doesn’t mean anything. It doesn’t. I say I love minotaur dicks, and centaurs, and those two fox pricks at the bar filling both my holes, and I love beer and fighting and ramming my tail up peoples' assholes. But that’s not real love, right? Love is - oh, god, I’m making a mess of this. Again. I keep doing this; it always works out so much better in my head.”
  36. Replace part with if chosen MinosRBad: "I've said in the past that I love minotaur dicks, and centaurs,"
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  39. IF PICKED MinosRBad PREVIOUSLY
  40. >“I guess what I’m trying to say is... I love you, Jack. I really, really do. Not fake, shitty, stupid love; not me saying it in the heat of the moment. I’ve been thinking about this for a while, now. You’ve been so good to me Jack, better than I deserve. You saved my family, you’ve given me a place to live, and more kindness than I could ever have imagined when I jumped you in the plains so very long ago.”
  41. Append with: "Hell, ever since you said you'd take care of my, you know, needs, I... I haven't actually been with anyone else other than you, I didn't even <i>want</i> to be with anyone else."
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  44. IF PICKED MinosRBad PREVIOUSLY
  45. >After a few minutes, though, Hel steps back and says, “I love you, Jack, with all my heart. You’re the person I want to spend the rest of my life with, if you’ll have me. But I still have to tell you what’s wrong.
  46. Add a sentence to this to drive home the point of no more slutting around:
  47. "After a few minutes, though, Hel steps back and says, "I love you, Jack, with all my heart. You’re the person I want to spend the rest of my life with, if you’ll have me, I wont need anyone else anymore. But I still need to tell you what’s wrong."
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  50. IF PICKED MinosRBad PREVIOUSLY
  51. >I’ve always thought I could slut around as much as I wanted, and I’d never have to worry about the consequences. But now that I have you... that’s no longer the case, I guess. When a salamander girl finds the person she wants to be with forever, we... change.”
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  54. >I love you with all my heart, [name], and I’m so very, very glad you love me back..”
  55. Unfinished ellipses.
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  58. Harpy dungeon, taking the staff there.
  59. >You pick up the Harpy Queen’s staff. It is a tall whitewood staff, nearly six feet in length, and covered in glowing eldritch runes, with a singular shimmering sphere of crystal at its head, which seems to have a swirling mist within.You place an eldritch staff in your first pouch.
  60. Move the placing of the staff to its own line, with one blank in between it and the paragraph.
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