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- Fighting Helia.
- >One of her scaled arms reaches around your waist, and the other toward your head, but you roll away from her grip and push her bodily away.
- I'm fairly sure "bodily" should be "body".
- Helia MinosRBad scene.
- >Well, it’s a minotaur, all right. But if there’s any attacking going on, it’s the poor beastman getting victimized. You see your salamander, her sword and bikini tossed haphazardly aside,
- Change to "You see your salamander friend," as right after this scene she stops fucking around, but here she's still mostly an acquaintance.
- >I never bothered counting, but it’s a lot. How could you possibly be helping me?”
- Remove the bolded "but it's a lot" part, it's just Savin exaggerating with his love for women taking it from everyone wankery, it also feels slightly hammed in.
- >“What do you mean 'addictive?' How the hell is bullspunk addictive; the fuck kinda sense does that make?”, just like how cowgirls have addictive breastmilk
- >She lightly scowls while she absorbs the information. You wonder how she’s going to deal with this.
- Sentence just cuts off there. Amend it to:
- ""What do you mean 'addictive?' How the hell is bullspunk addictive; the fuck kinda sense does that make?" You start explaining plainly that it's just like how cowgirls have addictive breast milk, she lightly scowls while she absorbs the information.
- You wonder how she's going to deal with this."
- Next screen there seems to be an empty line at the top of the text.
- [Its Okay tooltip] fix "Its" to be "It's"
- "You figure that's more trouble than it's worth, just let her do her 'thing' with the minotaurs and other creatures."
- [Satisfy Her]
- "She wont need anything else again — addictive or not — as long as she's with you."
- Since this mod changes her sleeping with other characters, this tooltip should reflect that.
- IF PICKED MinosRBad PREVIOUSLY
- Helia's Love Confession.
- >“I don’t just like you, [name] - I mean, I do. Like you, I mean. But it’s... it’s more than that, you know? Sure, I’ve said the word, but I say 'love' to a lot of people, a lot of things. I love your ordinary-looking pecker and everything else about you. But... but that doesn’t mean anything. It doesn’t. I say I love minotaur dicks, and centaurs, and those two fox pricks at the bar filling both my holes, and I love beer and fighting and ramming my tail up peoples' assholes. But that’s not real love, right? Love is - oh, god, I’m making a mess of this. Again. I keep doing this; it always works out so much better in my head.”
- Replace part with if chosen MinosRBad: "I've said in the past that I love minotaur dicks, and centaurs,"
- IF PICKED MinosRBad PREVIOUSLY
- >“I guess what I’m trying to say is... I love you, Jack. I really, really do. Not fake, shitty, stupid love; not me saying it in the heat of the moment. I’ve been thinking about this for a while, now. You’ve been so good to me Jack, better than I deserve. You saved my family, you’ve given me a place to live, and more kindness than I could ever have imagined when I jumped you in the plains so very long ago.”
- Append with: "Hell, ever since you said you'd take care of my, you know, needs, I... I haven't actually been with anyone else other than you, I didn't even <i>want</i> to be with anyone else."
- IF PICKED MinosRBad PREVIOUSLY
- >After a few minutes, though, Hel steps back and says, “I love you, Jack, with all my heart. You’re the person I want to spend the rest of my life with, if you’ll have me. But I still have to tell you what’s wrong.
- Add a sentence to this to drive home the point of no more slutting around:
- "After a few minutes, though, Hel steps back and says, "I love you, Jack, with all my heart. You’re the person I want to spend the rest of my life with, if you’ll have me, I wont need anyone else anymore. But I still need to tell you what’s wrong."
- IF PICKED MinosRBad PREVIOUSLY
- >I’ve always thought I could slut around as much as I wanted, and I’d never have to worry about the consequences. But now that I have you... that’s no longer the case, I guess. When a salamander girl finds the person she wants to be with forever, we... change.”
- >I love you with all my heart, [name], and I’m so very, very glad you love me back..”
- Unfinished ellipses.
- Harpy dungeon, taking the staff there.
- >You pick up the Harpy Queen’s staff. It is a tall whitewood staff, nearly six feet in length, and covered in glowing eldritch runes, with a singular shimmering sphere of crystal at its head, which seems to have a swirling mist within.You place an eldritch staff in your first pouch.
- Move the placing of the staff to its own line, with one blank in between it and the paragraph.
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