<Silvors> Um, hi
<Wogglebug> yes hello
<Silvors> I made a character and wanted to know if you'd look at it? I didn't know what to put for position >.>
<Wogglebug> I can look yeah
<Wogglebug> Link?
<Silvors> http://scp-foundation-origins.wikidot.com/character:zita-jasper
<Silvors> Iiii completely forgot
<Silvors> Derp
<Wogglebug> is zita  real name
<Wogglebug> sounds like pasta
<Silvors> Zita is a real italian name
<Wogglebug> the ethnicity/nationality is palestinian
<Wogglebug> afaik
<Wogglebug> was streaked, dyed hair common in the 50s?
<Wogglebug> stats are right
<Wogglebug> spec 1 shouldn't apply to large enemies
<Silvors> Zita wasn't her name when she was a slave, it was the name Vincent gave her after he adopted her.
<Wogglebug> or like, when fighting with a team
<Wogglebug> you know, not on bosses
<Silvors> Gotcha
<Wogglebug> a flat bonus to dodgin in general is a bad spec
<Wogglebug> too strong
<Silvors> Okay
<Wogglebug> and not very interesting
<Silvors> Honestly, the dodging one was the last one I did. I had three points and didn't know what to spend it on
<Wogglebug> 'nonviolent interior areas' doesn't make  a lot of sense
<Silvors> As in areas that aren't destroyed or where combat occured and stuff? Like everday rooms.
<Wogglebug> 'never considered unarmed' doesn't really make sense
<Wogglebug> there isn't an unarmed condition - you just have what you have
<Wogglebug> I think you got the wrong century for the abolishment of slavery?
<Wogglebug> The RP is in the 1950s, not the 1850s
<Silvors> I screwed up the century of the abolishment, not the century of the RP. Derp.
<Wogglebug> I would idtch the slavery thing in general
<Wogglebug> It's hard to pull something like that off even with a lot of knowledge
<Wogglebug> And what you have here doesn't indicate that level of familiarity
<Silvors> I've done it before rather well, actually.
<Wogglebug> Well, either way, it doesn't really work for the time period.
<Silvors> Okay
<Wogglebug> it's not a bad start
<Wogglebug> for like a first pass
<Silvors> Well I'm not changing her being a slave as part of her backstory.
<Silvors> I'm happy for any other suggestions though
<Wogglebug> I went and checked with all the other GMs just to be sure, but that's not gonna fly
<Silvors> ?
<Wogglebug> As in, having the character be a former slave is a no-go
<Silvors> Can I ask why?
<Wogglebug> It's a very difficult thing to pull off, playing a character with a history like that. It's not something we'd generally want a new player to do, especially without anyone being able to vouch for said player's skills in RPing. This is further compounded by your apparent lack of understanding of the history of slavery in the region at hand.
<Silvors> Well the abolishment thing was just me misreading a date and I know that some players here could vouch for my skill at RPing because I'm in another RP with like 5 of the people from this channel which is why I bothered checking Origins out. In fact, this character is just a modified version of a character I play there, changed for the setting.
<Silvors> The original version of Zita was a slave to vampires in Italy, not a slave to normal people in Canada.

30 to 40 minutes later

<Silvors> ?
<Wogglebug> Hmm?
<Silvors> Just wondering if you were going to reply
<Wogglebug> Oh
<Wogglebug> No, I didn't have a reply
<Silvors> Alright