7:21 "this is..."
---> "this is a lot to ask! this is one huge list!"

7:23 "we can star.."
---> "we can start.."

7:28 "oh its a gil
---> "oh, its a girl!"

7:29 "captain, can that girl that little really pitch?"
---> very bad mistake. the correct sentence is "captain, can that little girl really pitch?"

7:33 "she looks capricious"
---> i dont know what the real meaning is, maybe it is "she looks weak" or something, but please change the word into something simple

10:09 "???"
---> "shonen jump"

11:25 "just want..."---> "i just want to be with you, akane"