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- Hello Caramel_Sweets!
- My name is xDraghun and today I will be reviewing your plot. Lets start off with your structure.
- Your structure is lacking depth and detail. Your block palette doesnt really compliment each other. Try to use slabs/stairs for detailing towards your walls and push in the walls for depth. If you need a reference, go to ./warp depthtutorial.
- Your trees look bonemealed which is bad. Remove them and start all over with custom trees. I suggest adding branches and roots to your trees for realism. Your flower doesnt really make sense on top of your structure and the actual flower needs some work. Right now, it doesnt really look like a flower bud/petals.
- I cant tell if this pillar things on the corners are structures or part of your terrain. Either way, They look bad. I suggest that you get rid of them. Work on your terrain by adding hills or mountains and adding different blocks for variation and color. Obviously add blocks that match your theme/palette.
- Overall, I think your plot still needs some major work done to it before I can rank you up to novice. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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